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Ayo, Nigga beta back down or ya life wont "Subsist" (Definition:Exist)
Paired up with tha wrong one, ya caught in tha midst

Ima rip you apart like saw "Oh yes,there will be blood"
Settin off lyrical fire works but this niggaz a fuckin dud

Embarrassed, Got fucked up in his battle with complexity, Left beatin, unable to dispute
Inability to comprehend my rhymes perplexity, no wonder he watches anime, his dicks mine-ute (immeasurably small)

Easy kill, to murder a nigga who likes to fuck chickens
Im hiz Bitches Colonel, cuz that hoes 'Finger Licken'

Check it, Ima Emcee biohazard, Floodin you with disease
Only got votez by payin a flat fee, Doesnt belong to rap, try "98 Degrees"

I spit lighting, With intentions to " Strike you Down"
No point fighting, must be humiliating, "Spiked by a clown"

-TwIzTiD

-im not sick im canceric , everythin i write turns you mad when you hear it , full of insane flow
-your lines are more played than cricket , im engineering lyrics, and you cant fix a stupid radio
-overruning your plain flow , terrorist bombin your brain hoe , so quit the dumb shit bitch
battlin me im insane yo, pull out the chainsaw , send you back with slit wrists
-give him a limp like bizkit, make him crumble with a fist hit , make him the next rap queen
i aint scared of this kid , the only thing thats twizted , is his lame rap scheme
-like typeo ill end up battlin three , watch them grab there saddles and flee , guess i wont choke them
-ill speak frankly , when you're in a battle with me , you're goin down like your msn chat program
-you're nothin see my balls come poke them , fake thug givin me a furious frown
- a failure sittin in his room depressed and smokin, and as usefull as an unhumourous clown

tried a new style.. one of the hardest , gave me a headache.

lol nice verse both of you lets get it started

Entertainment : Subsist
Punches : Subsist
Vocab : Twiz
Personals :Tie
Similes/Metas: Subsist
Flow/Structure: Subsist
Wordplay: Twiz

Overall : Subsist good battle i just think subsist verse hit harder and had some nice punches twiztid u came weak in the first couple of bars u gotta be consistent throughout the whole verse but nice job both of u.

Fav Lines:
-ill speak frankly , when you're in a battle with me , you're goin down like your msn chat program - Subsist

Inability to comprehend my rhymes perplexity, no wonder he watches anime, his dicks mine-ute (immeasurably small) - Twiztid

Both Was Weak To Be Honest. It's Nice To See You Trying To "Diversifye" Your Flow, Always A Good Thing Subsist...Props Man..

Entertainment:Twiztid, It Was More Complex
Punches:Subsist
Vocab:Twiztid, Hands Down
Personals:Tie, Both Consistent
Metas:Subsist
Structure:Subsist
Wordplay:Twiztid

Over All:Twiztid
His Verse Was More Complex, An Some Bars Subsist's Didn't Ryhme.
Example(Insane-Flow, Radio) (Choke Them, Program)

Favorite Lines:
Twiztid(I spit lighting, With intentions to " Strike you Down"
No point fighting, must be humiliating, "Spiked by a clown")

Subsist(overruning your plain flow , terrorist bombin your brain hoe , so quit the dumb shit bitch
battlin me im insane yo, pull out the chainsaw , send you back with slit wrists)

they don't rhyme perfectly, but they rhyme good enough for me

i think subsist easily took this, his personals hit a lot harder, his punches were better, his rhyme scheme was better, twisted had better wordplay, but subsist took this shit

overall:sist

2-1 Subsist Uppin

Good Battle But Subsist Took This One ..

Entertainment: Subsist
Punches:Subsist
Vocab:Tie
Personals: Subsist
Structure: Twiztid
Metas:Subsist
Wordplay:Twiztid

Subsist Took It Over All
Favorite Lines "give him a limp like bizkit, make him crumble with a fist hit , make him the next rap queen
i aint scared of this kid , the only thing thats twizted , is his lame rap scheme"

Favorite Lines From Twiztid
Ima rip you apart like saw "Oh yes,there will be blood"
Settin off lyrical fire works but this niggaz a fuckin dud

-give him a limp like bizkit, make him crumble with a fist hit , make him the next rap queen
i aint scared of this kid , the only thing thats twizted , is his lame rap scheme
And
- a failure sittin in his room depressed and smokin, and as usefull as an unhumourous clown

Are The Lines That Stood Out For Me. Jmx Had Good Ones But Not Enough Personal Punches. Subsist's Had Better Multis, Structure And Consistent Disses. Jmx Was More Complex in a Non-Battling Way Though And That's Why My Vote is For Subsist

4-1 Good Shit Folks, Still Uppin For More Votes....Lets Get This Round Over With!!!!!

vote - subsist

both verses weren't anything special but subsist was more consistant with lines

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