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Post by drunken jesus »

voice is cool but you flowed way to slow for this reggae style beat, it makes you sound offbeat
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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" a very nice audio"

u lied to me :cry:
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It was cool man



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Post by precise »

sounds like youre reading youre lyrics and dont got em memorized, i cant tell whether the vocals need to be turned up or down cause some spots youre really hard to hear, but it seems like the voice takes over the beat. anyways im not gonna hate, i think if you just put some more effort into it lik a little more "umph" itll be aright, and put exageration on youre rhymes cause you fade off at the end of youre lines a bit. lol as far as mix quality theres less popping and stuff then there is in mine so thats coo. peace
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Post by overkill »

Tight music, but you need more confidence in your work, you know the words by heart but your spitt'in them as if your reading from a piece of paper. Look forward in hearing more of your music.
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yeh i was readin em off paper but i've improved learned to memorize bought a new mike
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