Complexity Vs Precise ( winner plex)
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Complexity Vs Precise ( winner plex)
6-8 barz due tommorow
Last edited by complexity on Sat Jan 28, 2006 4:28 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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lol, arighty heres my verse, yea i was sayin to viral normaly you gotta check in before a deadline is posted, but it aint a big deal. anyways yea here ya go.
hey-plex we already battled so you know you aint-best/ and to tell you the truth i aint feelin youre rhymes like safe-sex wit extra latex/
read along as i spit wit shakespearic strategy/
cause every emcee to battle-me is left as a "tragedy"/ a clash-with-me is a catastrophy/
you gotta watch youre bones when i spit straight-faced/ cause after a battle takes-place im like an angry waiter- i break-"plates"/
i spit like a scythe- yea my "cut's" "against the grain"/ yours is basic so i must "reject ya name"/
*rhyme-defecit-disorder* is the only way you "complex"/ youre useless in text- its like Im battlin blind kids without brail on the net/
and to finish this-off ill remind you that you spit-soft/ if boards were streets id be rippin a fuckin clip-off into youre bitch-talk with these raps i so easily deafeat kids-thoughts/
to clear things up a "complex" is a psychological disorder, if you dont believe me look it up if you want. and if someone doesnt get the other metaphores, i donno what to say cause they are fairly simple. peace, and good luck
hey-plex we already battled so you know you aint-best/ and to tell you the truth i aint feelin youre rhymes like safe-sex wit extra latex/
read along as i spit wit shakespearic strategy/
cause every emcee to battle-me is left as a "tragedy"/ a clash-with-me is a catastrophy/
you gotta watch youre bones when i spit straight-faced/ cause after a battle takes-place im like an angry waiter- i break-"plates"/
i spit like a scythe- yea my "cut's" "against the grain"/ yours is basic so i must "reject ya name"/
*rhyme-defecit-disorder* is the only way you "complex"/ youre useless in text- its like Im battlin blind kids without brail on the net/
and to finish this-off ill remind you that you spit-soft/ if boards were streets id be rippin a fuckin clip-off into youre bitch-talk with these raps i so easily deafeat kids-thoughts/
to clear things up a "complex" is a psychological disorder, if you dont believe me look it up if you want. and if someone doesnt get the other metaphores, i donno what to say cause they are fairly simple. peace, and good luck
facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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its hell-ya-facin, i'll cut at ya brain for cell-a-brasion....precise? YAh! like delegation!!//
i'm taking names and making the-statement//in Evil call me Keanu Reeves I'll be your replacement//
fuck this imposter, i'm as precise as possible, you on E.V.I.L's Roster which means you're not an obstacle//
lost-ya-bones, when i crossed-ya-dome, your raps not a-parent like a foster-home//
a true-emcee, i spit fluently,i'm getting rid of "pre" and he still aint hit puberty//
with his first-free, he didn't hurt-me, now i'm burning P like genital herpees//
when it comes to shit, in-rap-your-it...makes me sick, his style is like the news its inaccurate//
put together-the-factors, i'm putting you underground further then levers-in-tractors//
I'm dropping a PR, but he aint causing no trouble//its funny his "rap career" is taking off like last years shuttle//
make this kid pissed n watch his blood-bubble//i'm suttle, "ur flow shallow" like a mud-puddle//
no rebuttle! its quieter than recitals, "i'm giving away medals" but not free-titles//
fuck teen-idols, i'm through-idle, cuz Im dropping P (pee) like kids that are suicidal//
Pr: problem report, common
any others, just ask, good luck
medals: is the system on here, and medal as in car,
title owning a car
apparent (meant precise)
i'm taking names and making the-statement//in Evil call me Keanu Reeves I'll be your replacement//
fuck this imposter, i'm as precise as possible, you on E.V.I.L's Roster which means you're not an obstacle//
lost-ya-bones, when i crossed-ya-dome, your raps not a-parent like a foster-home//
a true-emcee, i spit fluently,i'm getting rid of "pre" and he still aint hit puberty//
with his first-free, he didn't hurt-me, now i'm burning P like genital herpees//
when it comes to shit, in-rap-your-it...makes me sick, his style is like the news its inaccurate//
put together-the-factors, i'm putting you underground further then levers-in-tractors//
I'm dropping a PR, but he aint causing no trouble//its funny his "rap career" is taking off like last years shuttle//
make this kid pissed n watch his blood-bubble//i'm suttle, "ur flow shallow" like a mud-puddle//
no rebuttle! its quieter than recitals, "i'm giving away medals" but not free-titles//
fuck teen-idols, i'm through-idle, cuz Im dropping P (pee) like kids that are suicidal//
Pr: problem report, common
any others, just ask, good luck
medals: is the system on here, and medal as in car,
title owning a car
apparent (meant precise)
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multis - complexity, precise just had lil 2 syllable pieces for the most part
metaphors - precise
similies - complexity, precises didn't hit hard at all
rhyme scheme - tie, neither used any besides basic
structure - complexity, precises was all over the place
lines - complexity
overall - complexity, this battle wasn't that great
metaphors - precise
similies - complexity, precises didn't hit hard at all
rhyme scheme - tie, neither used any besides basic
structure - complexity, precises was all over the place
lines - complexity
overall - complexity, this battle wasn't that great
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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drunken jesus
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thats why i said for the most part...
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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drunken jesus
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lets get some more votes on this battle
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Multis:Precise
Metas:Plex
Similies:Precise
Enjoyment:Plex
Vocab:Plex
Wordplay:Plex
Rhyme Scheme:hhmmm Plex
Personals:Plex
Overall:Plex
keep it up both of you i mean u did good too precise but toms stood out more it had better vocab,wordplay,etc... and didnt get kinda boring but keep it up your good..but tom got this one..elevate...
Metas:Plex
Similies:Precise
Enjoyment:Plex
Vocab:Plex
Wordplay:Plex
Rhyme Scheme:hhmmm Plex
Personals:Plex
Overall:Plex
keep it up both of you i mean u did good too precise but toms stood out more it had better vocab,wordplay,etc... and didnt get kinda boring but keep it up your good..but tom got this one..elevate...
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