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feel free to post a link to a battle you've lost and i'll breakdown thoroughly why/if you lost

you lost cause you suck at life

you lost cause all of your lines were simplistic, you don't have to say the most complicated shit to have good lines, you can say simplistic shit cleverly and it'll have the same effect, also you were struggling to rhyme, in rapping rhyming is one of the more important aspects if you're not rhyming fluidly and effortlessly it really hinders the overall quality of your verse

ight thanks man

that could've gone either way, both verses were really generic, although yours was less so than theoneyouhates cause his ain't have nothing to do with you

the reason you lost probably is cause you didn't really have alotta wordplay, the jay hova and big p lines were strong but the rest was kinda just filler/shit talk, if you would've had another solid line or two and structured your verse so that your bars were more even and fluid you probably would've won easily

y not check dis one


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/kurse ... t5886.html

T.K.6 wrote:http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/t-k-6 ... t5773.html

could've went either way, no real explanation why you lost or why p won

lilblayze wrote:y not check dis one


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/kurse ... t5886.html

you didn't really have any solid lines, your punchlines were kinda elementry, try to be more clever and humorous with your lines, it wasn't a horrible verse but nothing in it was real quotable or memorable

ok bro thanx

-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/soahk ... t4717.html

I think your verse was better..
And no way should LadySams vote be allowed if it's the vote that decided who got the victory(IMO)