(Round 1)Sequence Vs Symbolikull
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(Round 1)Sequence Vs Symbolikull
8 Bars( 1 Bar = 1 Line)
Due In 3 Days
Topic : The Dream Of A Drug Addict
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Multis-
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-
Creativity-
Structure-
Vocab-
Due In 3 Days
Topic : The Dream Of A Drug Addict
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Multis-
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-
Creativity-
Structure-
Vocab-
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
You can sorta-see i go in my own world with a large stock Of E.
And Everything Was Cheap, And Even Better Everything I Got Was Free.
Ruians-My-Hopes, Of Quitting When I Get Cravings Of Shoorms-And-Coke.
Try Not To Croak, But Ill Probley Choke, With All These Fumes-In-My-Throat.
Its Gotta Be My Luckey Score, To Smoke A Blunt Even If Just Two-Or-More,
And Pay For No Fuckin New Hinges, When These Cops Bust Through-My-Door.
I dream About Not Going Out And Buying The Drugs, When They Could Just Deliver-The-Stuff.
And Not Be Caught, And Handled In Cuffs, And I Dont Die With The Toxic Shit In My Liver-N-Guts.
And Everything Was Cheap, And Even Better Everything I Got Was Free.
Ruians-My-Hopes, Of Quitting When I Get Cravings Of Shoorms-And-Coke.
Try Not To Croak, But Ill Probley Choke, With All These Fumes-In-My-Throat.
Its Gotta Be My Luckey Score, To Smoke A Blunt Even If Just Two-Or-More,
And Pay For No Fuckin New Hinges, When These Cops Bust Through-My-Door.
I dream About Not Going Out And Buying The Drugs, When They Could Just Deliver-The-Stuff.
And Not Be Caught, And Handled In Cuffs, And I Dont Die With The Toxic Shit In My Liver-N-Guts.
..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
I think Sym had a better flow to his and better multis imo..
Really liked this line
"Im “Driftin away from the Accomplishments“, steady “Slippin in -n- out of my Consciousness“,
Ona “Mission to see all of the Constellates“, wit no wings Ive “Risen to be above the Continents“,"
Multis-Sym
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-Sym
Creativity-Sym
Structure-Sym
Vocab-Sym
Clean Sweep imo
Really liked this line
"Im “Driftin away from the Accomplishments“, steady “Slippin in -n- out of my Consciousness“,
Ona “Mission to see all of the Constellates“, wit no wings Ive “Risen to be above the Continents“,"
Multis-Sym
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-Sym
Creativity-Sym
Structure-Sym
Vocab-Sym
Clean Sweep imo
Last edited by SlickMex on Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:09 am, edited 1 time in total.
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
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- Losses: 16
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nice verses. symbolikul took this tho.
his multis were better and he played with the topic better
fav line:
My eyelids catch “Denies that are as Pure as the Oceans“, im not addicted “My Mind only Fears bein Awoken"
Multis- symb
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme- symb
Creativity- symb
Structure- symb
Vocab- symb
good job tho sequence.
his multis were better and he played with the topic better
fav line:
My eyelids catch “Denies that are as Pure as the Oceans“, im not addicted “My Mind only Fears bein Awoken"
Multis- symb
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme- symb
Creativity- symb
Structure- symb
Vocab- symb
good job tho sequence.
- ~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
multies- symbolikull
rhyme Scheme- symbolikull
creativity- symbolikull
structure- symbolikull
vocab- symbolikull
rhyme Scheme- symbolikull
creativity- symbolikull
structure- symbolikull
vocab- symbolikull
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- ~Symbolikull~
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