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(Round 1) Complexity Vs Rell Fiasco
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 4:34 am
by 16 Micz
8 Bars( 1 Bar = 1 Line)
Due In 3 Days
Topic : "My Life Is Like"
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Multis-
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-
Creativity-
Structure-
Vocab-
Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 9:44 am
by complexity
Im depressed-an-rejected, because my life is like a sophomore-lp
its less-than-expected, nobody will offer-to-help-me
Im destined-to-exit, took a shot at life without making an impact
Im taking-the-rest, intact, bullets straight-to-my-vest
in fact, im waiting-for-death, yet I always get my wind-back
my life is like heroin addicts, all I get is tears-n-slits
the question is wheres-my-fix, all eyes on me, and my embarrassments
the cameras-lite,yet my life is so bad even Ophah wouldn't cherish-it
Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:54 pm
by drunken jesus
vote - rell fiasco
complex's verse was alright but he wasn't really saying anything, rell just had a better all around verse
Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:48 pm
by complexity
Nods
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:29 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
plex moves on