(Final Round)Complexity Vs Symbolikull
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(Final Round)Complexity Vs Symbolikull
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- ~Symbolikull~
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16 Bars( 1 Bar = 1 Line)
Due In 3 Days
Topics :
Both Of You Will Be Writing On - Teenage runaway
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Multis-
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-
Creativity-
Structure-
Vocab-
Due In 3 Days
Topics :
Both Of You Will Be Writing On - Teenage runaway
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Multis-
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-
Creativity-
Structure-
Vocab-
Last edited by 16 Micz on Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- ~Symbolikull~
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- complexity
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- complexity
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What defines the projects? the odds are strict, the signs of progress
lead to nowhere, how many times the glock hits, blinds ur conscience
what caused me to go there, I cant find the logic, now Im stuck on the strip
Ive had enough of this shit, Im suffering everyday ducking the clips
on my way to work; seeing shades of gray, letting my life just fade away
my wages are low, im basically broke, so I sell drugs to raise my pay
its gotta to be safe to say, Im a waste of life, I rancorously face the day
a teenager that chased the light n ran away,now I have no place to stay
in my life, I gotta say, dropping out of school, was probably the highlight
now Im in the twilight, nothing good is going to happen, so why write?
the hood is spread with tragic scenes, and you hafta to have the green
so the average scheme, involves guns, now can you imagine me
trying to "run again"?, like recycling plants, everyones unloading magazines
some for fun, its basically gun for gun, until a faggot screams
take it from a bum; I shouldnt of run, now Im facing my worst fears
I want my parents to search here, as Im shedding my first tears
lead to nowhere, how many times the glock hits, blinds ur conscience
what caused me to go there, I cant find the logic, now Im stuck on the strip
Ive had enough of this shit, Im suffering everyday ducking the clips
on my way to work; seeing shades of gray, letting my life just fade away
my wages are low, im basically broke, so I sell drugs to raise my pay
its gotta to be safe to say, Im a waste of life, I rancorously face the day
a teenager that chased the light n ran away,now I have no place to stay
in my life, I gotta say, dropping out of school, was probably the highlight
now Im in the twilight, nothing good is going to happen, so why write?
the hood is spread with tragic scenes, and you hafta to have the green
so the average scheme, involves guns, now can you imagine me
trying to "run again"?, like recycling plants, everyones unloading magazines
some for fun, its basically gun for gun, until a faggot screams
take it from a bum; I shouldnt of run, now Im facing my worst fears
I want my parents to search here, as Im shedding my first tears
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- ~Symbolikull~
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ayo my bad, i hit a slump in funds and lost my comcast for a while but its back k up and runnin now, so heres my verse that i have had done since the second day after this was set up..
my bad guys, my apologies:
It was a Summer Day, and wit One Mistake, made a 16 yr old little man became a Run Away,
Couldn't stand his Mothers Hate, since his Father broke out the same way the Rubber Breaks,//
Learned from his brother to Act Shady, an accident child born thru scorn as a Crack Baby,
Fingers itchin to push a Macks Safety, addicted to something he aint never tried so his Hands Shaky,//
Hes slippin ona Mission to Eat, never Lived in the Streets, no common sense or Tricks up his Sleeves,
Cant walk on his own like Christopher Reeves, wit no Pitchers to Drink hes getting Sick from the Heat,//
Its High Noon, when his bad mood hits him like a Typhoon, spots a dude in White Shoes and a Nice Suit,
The Hype Soon, takes over his Life Thru, the hunger and the pain, his stomach is sayin “lets go Buy Foodâ€
my bad guys, my apologies:
It was a Summer Day, and wit One Mistake, made a 16 yr old little man became a Run Away,
Couldn't stand his Mothers Hate, since his Father broke out the same way the Rubber Breaks,//
Learned from his brother to Act Shady, an accident child born thru scorn as a Crack Baby,
Fingers itchin to push a Macks Safety, addicted to something he aint never tried so his Hands Shaky,//
Hes slippin ona Mission to Eat, never Lived in the Streets, no common sense or Tricks up his Sleeves,
Cant walk on his own like Christopher Reeves, wit no Pitchers to Drink hes getting Sick from the Heat,//
Its High Noon, when his bad mood hits him like a Typhoon, spots a dude in White Shoes and a Nice Suit,
The Hype Soon, takes over his Life Thru, the hunger and the pain, his stomach is sayin “lets go Buy Foodâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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multis: Plex
rhyming/rhyme scheme: Plex
creativity: Ghost
structure:Plex
vocab:Plex..
Vote - Plex... But Yo.. U Should Be a Lil More Realistic Plex.
. Im stuck on the strip
Ive had enough of this shit, Im suffering everyday ducking the clips
on my way to work; seeing shades of gray, letting my life just fade away
my wages are low, im basically broke, so I sell drugs to raise my pay
rhyming/rhyme scheme: Plex
creativity: Ghost
structure:Plex
vocab:Plex..
Vote - Plex... But Yo.. U Should Be a Lil More Realistic Plex.
. Im stuck on the strip
Ive had enough of this shit, Im suffering everyday ducking the clips
on my way to work; seeing shades of gray, letting my life just fade away
my wages are low, im basically broke, so I sell drugs to raise my pay
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