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Just random Diss

Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

I heard you were standin in tha block all Alone//
and im plannin 2 stick you up 4 ur money and ur mobile phone//
but tha problem is//
i aint got a knife or gun//
but i got a rusty chainsaw//
imma rip it thru ya neck//
and let tha mother fucking blood poor//

imma bit buzy but imma finish of later


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Post by Brah-Vo »

flow was choppy .. and saw and poor dont rhyme unless they're in the aussie accent.
u gotta make ur bars equal .. and ur structure needs work. but its ok. and shouldnt this be in the scriptureS?
lol.
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Post by precise »

yea, this shouldnt be in the cypher section
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

what kind of name is fabolicious for a dude?
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