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iight iight... yall are right.... jus cuz i get a 8-10 on other sites dont mean im better then peeps on other sites... my bad for getin off on the wrong foot... jus try not to be as big of haters.... hope yall lik this one better...

(The Our Father)... Lord Hear my Prayer.....
Our Father, Who Ark In Heaven, Hollow Be Thy Name, Thy Kingdome Come, Thy Will Be Done, On Earth As It Is In Heaven, Give Us This Day Our Daily Bread, An Forgive Us Our Trespasses, As We Forgive Those Who Tresspasses Against Us, An Lead Us Not Into Temptation, But Deliver Us From Evil, The Kingdome, The Power, The Glory Are Yours, Forever And Ever.... Ahmen.....


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Lord please hear our Prayer......
We needa to take a turn from our negative nature, so i propose a wager..
All i can do is hope its not to major, cant anything make this evil any faker..
Greediness over the paper, even over writtin words, greed is the slayer..
Lord please hear our Prayer......

Luna-Tech (Fade)
Im truly a good person, im not the type to make a good kind of mood worsen //
I dont like all this cursin, i jus lose myself an my bad self jus seems to brust in //
My personality jus seems to be reversin, an the evils always whos the first in //
My rage an anger are jus fourced in, bad language an gustures keep dispersin //
This is where the good side takes control, an the evil jus leaves my soul //
We must learn from mistakes for goodness shakes gain stronge console //
So set ur thoughts aside an jus let ur heart take a ride, peace is the goal //
Get upan be productive, not destructive, do u wanna fall back in that hole //
I need ta try an set a good example, but its hard to tune out the bad //
Im tryna give yall alil sample, but its hard to make these people glad //
Aint anybody tryna take a leap on faith, an to me its so very very sad //
U jus needa leap on an embrace, let things pass witout getin so mad //

Kleptic
As gun shots pop off all the fun stops and drops off /
The serenade of pain dont stop blood spills cough cough /
Its how were livin we take more than were given /
Sum say the way is religion but no time to get in /
We get caught in the struggle wit the need to hustle /
Stuck wit weed to hush the muscle lyrics a rushed rebutle /
Its the pain in this game to fame many stop wit no gain /
Stuck in the rain wit stains stress explodes like propane /
Everyday i question my ways and plays and my faith /
Wonderin my path when the days of end raise the wraith /

Luna-tech (Fade)
Lord please hear our Prayer......
We needa to take a turn from our negative nature, so i propose a wager..
All i can do is hope its not to major, cant anything make this evil any faker..
Greediness over the paper, even over writtin words, greed is the slayer..
Lord please hear our Prayer......

Kleptic
When i reach the gates will i have appeased the fates /
Yes iv seen the hate payed my dues released by states /
Host by jail post my bail and then toast the tale /
While most folks they fail lives left to mold and stale /
I sit and pray think of the sins i comitted today /
This fallen angel lay after the evil iv done as play /
No one knows how many times a week i throw blows /
As foes impose i think of those that i left froze /
Many friends got popped by foes moped wit holes /
Kids like young streams bullets stoped there flow /
Peace seems impossible no way to avoid an obstacle /
Now tell me again how ya hood ya ghettos unstopable?/

Luna-Tech (Fade)
Why do we get in troublesome kinda shit, it cant be avoided wit stealth //
People depend on others but their the ones who can trully help theirself //
Yall jus need to be urself, ignore theses damn gangs an jus rep urself //
Get off the streets an protect ur health, is losin ur life worth the wealth //
Tone ur crimimal acts down'n stop clowin, so jus give us jus little relief //
Oh Shit! Luna-Techs tryin to set things right, so everyones in disbelief //
These gang bangers are jus so damn foolish, no honor or real beliefs //
All about violence, killin, an pure cruelness, disrespectfull feelin thiefs //
Some say pain would happen an God knew this, but thats not the point //
The point of it isnt that Gods ghoulish, its our job to do good an anoint //
Maken a better person outta these hates is hard, its not really so floint // (fluent)
Im tryin to find some good in yall, obivioulsy this aint a gutta kinda joint //

Luna-tech (Fade)
Lord please hear our Prayer......
We needa to take a turn from our negative nature, so i propose a wager..
All i can do is hope its not to major, cant anything make this evil any faker..
Greediness over the paper, even over writtin words, greed is the slayer..
Lord please hear our Prayer......


May we pray... every day... untill 6-feet is where we lay.....
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iight can i get som feed plz...
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can i get feed on this too
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Post by 16 Micz »

truthfully this was wack didnt hold my attention this was some baby lyrics and uh what are u suppose to be a gospel rapper?
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Post by complexity »

Well man, this was some christian rap, which isn't to exciting. I thought kpletic came with a nice flow. And you got stronger as it went on, but i personally dont' want to read to much of this. hehe
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