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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:01 am
by Ambiguous Realm
lol@thats it...twista was only used as creativity.. considering chicago's part of tornado valley
mentioned do or die.. a group from chicago
mentioned the south sideof chicago which is where all the gangs r located..referring to the intro...mentioned 312.. area code.. detroit's 313(if u recall from 8mile) and chicago's 312
there's more to it then "that's it" and reason y i involved violence more is cuz its got the highest murder "count"(not rate) then any other city
n e ways 3-1 uppin
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:14 pm
by Kurse
Aiight...here we go.
GHOST
Flow: 15
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 8
Originality: 4
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 6
Stays On Topic: 12
Execution Of Topic: 3
Total= 48
*True...the first half of the verse was loaded with "I"..."I"..."I" and a "We". This was about ur set fam, not about what you do that's similar in reference to ur city. Though there was decent wordplay, it remained not very impressive because it was more "sports team/sports star" related and beginning to transition into "famous musician" related. Just can't say I was feelin it alot..i think you could've repp'd ur city/state better than that cuz I've seen u drop hotter material before. Not bad...but it just didn't rattle me, ya know!?
and now...
EKOMS
Flow: 15
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 7
Originality: 7
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 8
Stays On Topic: 15
Execution Of Topic: 4
Total= 56
*Now the structure was realy easy to read, didn't break out as many multi's as Ghost did, but did stay on topic better as well as painted a lyrical discription of a "true" Chicagoians mentality for their neighborhood. It was a lil more original. Talked about the blocks, the gangs (which is a huge problem here), The Sears tower, and other things. Best line was the "Windy City, where Twista's at" Because of the double meanin. 1. We are called the Windy City cuz of the lake front, but Illinois is know for it's tornado's and twisters. And 2. yes we are the home of Twista the artist. Theres other shit he could've done better, but it's still not a bad score.
Ending Vote: EKOMS
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:44 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
3-2
no need to explain it toyh, its all good
Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:01 am
by Arvincible
ghost won this already, i dont think i have to vote.
Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:18 am
by Ambiguous Realm
then dont? lol, still uppin for this to end