God, Please..... (10 Barz)

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God, Please..... (10 Barz)

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No love an respect, got me screamin mo'murda, but check //
Since im the Tech, can let peep kno it hurt'ya, dramatic effect //
Wanna grab a neck, pull outa burna, see the blood on my tech reflect //
If u aint willin to protect, ur life aint takin a turna, im sorry we met //
I cant understand myself, an even myself cant understand me //
Is she expandin on stealth? is she seeing another man.. gee //
Well shawty u wanna go? an jus be free? then do it an leave me be //
But i keep jumpin back on it lika flee, one day i think that she'll re- //
Up an leave, jus kno, i dont want u to go, an be wit some one else, ya see //
I kno act foolish an disrespect my Ps, but ill always love my family //
Theyv been there since my day one, an yet i still treat them like shit //
But anyone gon fuck wit em an ill spraya gun, so u can feel the heat grip //
Yo ma, u kno ya son, is always gon love u, we had the most fun //
An yo pa, ya boys a man now, but i wish i could be a closer son //
I needa get my act straight, an deal wats on my plate an get right //
I kno i lack strength, watch my faith deflate, im tryna step into the light //
But my worlds dark, so it aint that bright, help jus seems too far outa sight //
I havent lost my mind, im jus lost in my mind, where its always night //
I jus hope, but i kno there aint a way to get away from my way, <uuhh> nope //
I wanna cope, but i kno its far to late to awake, God please roll me over till i croke //
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can i get feed on this too please!!!
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