When ThePalace messes with Ekoms

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When ThePalace messes with Ekoms

Post by Viral »

OK... consider this a continued version after tom's 10 minute verse



Bout to eliminate some palace-chumps//
same way faggots-hump these rap-spits-jump//

Apostle-

Claimin' to be lyrical but u happen to package-scrap//
Zippin' up ur body is the only time i baggage-crap//

This kid's unofficial, he needs to get-out-to-judge-rhymes//
All hes got flowin' is the spelling without-the-punch-lines//

Ariel-

Upset from The~End(period) when i'm prank-instigating//
U ain't nothin but another 2cent skank-in-the-making//

Images of ur face more clearly seen-under-debris//
Trashy ass ho, u were better off clean-under-the-sea//

Bliss-

Chick looked like a dude, but a nasty-ho//
'Stench' from 'below', like 'tuna' casserol//

Poppa Doc-
Hickory Dickory Doc.. now that's-a-flow//
ur spotlight's like food service, fast-to-go//

Cherry-

Been popped enough to make her tits-twitch//
She changed her name randomly to miss-bitch//

Honey-

What a surprise this cunt was bitter-after-all//
She's a stripper on a Pole(vote booth) with-her-act-to-fall//

Stunttown-Joints

Use to be the~block but it turned-into-a-curb//
After the battle with Q i burned-him-to-an-herb//

Ctown-

chocolate town hah... ya'll still pickin-my-cotton//
I made u faggots FALL and sickened-by-AUTUMN//

The Rest of Those Palace Morons-

Fuckin with Ekoms will get u split-sides//
Caught u bitches slippin like when shit-slides//

If i wanted this 'ranked' out i would've been dissin-by-'class'//
But instead i'll finish this off as i have the rest kissin-my-ass//


somethin quick before i depart from reality(aka going to sleep)

some feedback would be nice.. 1
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

niiiice..lol....i liked da pickin cotton line da best..lol ne thing to do wit pickin cotton seems to make me laugh..haha...i give it a 8.9/10
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Post by lunathecursedangel »

this was pretty basic, but still good wordplay, and all straight up disses, which is funny, i'm going to have all of them check out the diss..Lol
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Post by precise »

Toms frying up the beef.
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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