Why is it...
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I fed in DC when X took over in the Writtens feed lulz
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- Munteskue1
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I'll drop some poetry and start leaving feed.
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Word. Me too
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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Re: Why is it...
Some ppl lack the skill to do this...
Some ppl lack the time to do this...
and some ppl just don't care...
I love this stuff man and I do hope that ppl start pucking it all back up...
Some ppl lack the time to do this...
and some ppl just don't care...
I love this stuff man and I do hope that ppl start pucking it all back up...
All my girls be model hot/ Yea your girl she probably not....
- Skunkle Sam
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Poetry is difficult to critique, I feel that as a reader, I have no right to tell people how their writing should be. Raps, on the other hand, it matters more about how enjoyable it is to listen to, how it's set up, etc. I've read a lot more than I've commented on. In fact, the only reason I opened this topic was because I thought it was another one of your poems! Tease! But I'll leave my mark more often for ya.
And if Bruce Dickinson wants more cowbell, we should probably give him more cowbell!
And if Bruce Dickinson wants more cowbell, we should probably give him more cowbell!
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Re: Why is it...
like any good poetry or rap its got to be from the heart too many forced rhymes are about, and it weakens the intent to be meaningful.the focus strays from the original concept so easily when people try to hard to rhyme.poetry allows u to free yourself from these restraints and reach out on a different level
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