Uppin for votes

[align=center]clout this deplorable M&M like i wasnt in the mood for snacks
im 'fracturing skullz ' trenchin ya scalp, until this "magician can only pull his ' brain out his hat '
no trick up my sleeve when i efface his life span
texting aint his greatest fortitude seeing as he couldnt beat me with ...

MagicMark wrote:check..

what do you mean midnight...its 12.48am sunday, where i am.

my bad didnt know that lol. due in 1 hour starting now.

4 bars
no biting
due by midnight after check in

CATS are

Punches
Flow
Consistency
Personals
Wordplay
Enjoyment
Vote

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Nice......

let me know if your intrested.......

Pretty good.

i will set it up in a bit, dnt forget to check in.

Whatever, dont complain over one CAT, worry about the other ones you didnt succeed in, with that said, 1.

I gave him the personals for the lines in which he used your name.

Punches:Q
Multis: Q
Flow:Q
Metaphors: N/A
Personals:Q
Closer: N/A
Creativity: D
Enjoyment: D
Consistency: D
Vote: Q

Both of you guys need to chop you bars down abit, cus the streched lines fuck up the flow. Duce your a nice textcee but your punches arent landing, just grazing. And get more personal ...

first come first serve.

Whats good ?