i liked this shit man flowed well n overall it was a good peice G id say 8.5/10

ya vese was self explanatry no need for explanasions well not for me but some cats a bit stupid ay lol man shall we close this battle now take the win im not one of these niggaz who carnt take a loss an it obvious that cat voted for me coz u have some beef or summit n yeah my verse wasn't the best ...

i said he dont want the fame coz i read his info n it said riches or fame n he said respect so thats y i said that. n i spelt it wrong jus a typin error. thnx for the advice man hopefully al get betta wid some of your cats help

im always lookin for ways to elevate man thanks for the advice

lets say if u said 'verse was way below par blah blah blah' n then said how it could b improved then thats real help to a nigga but just pullin my rhymes down pffffffff

nigga y u hatin so much man am here to step ma game up n niggaz b just fuckin about wateva man

you dropped 4 so al only drop 4

This nigga what respect he don't want fame u gotta learn to spell ya name
Your ass is lame im taking aim leave u with more holes that a battle ship game

Some people get better when they rhyme was up wid u dawg u stuck in time
merkz b poppin the nines people dnt do ...

not realy a poet but concept seemed good so thought id try writtin one it could of been a lot betta so if any of ya poets take the concept n write some shit down that would b cool but here it is ma first poem open for feed if its wank just say y n giv propz thankz

At the age of 16 im still a baby I ...

well im from the uk so i was just finishing skool

R.I.P going out to all them lost

this dawg say he rollin them zig zags bk to bk
that might b y ya rhymes r wack
i ate good mc's for dinna b u just a snack
leave ya ass clapped out like biggie n pac

(no hatin nigga MOB keep it real)

that was hella hot

well man i plan 2 b the best n u can only b the best by takin on the best ya feel me if he wins al take the loss but wid a bit of feed i hope to elevate

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iight man ama set it up n drop as soon as i can

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