thanks for some positive will keep in mind the negative didnt add sturcutre just a quick spit off top

thanks

that 2nd verse had me geeking but on the real some people may whore on this part "i was watchin the sun start consumin the moon ........
in this dark room... Zoomin from shrooms
im usually snoozin at noon... its confusin its true... .. wonderin whos Human?? Then BOO!!!" its simple but i feelt that ...

good look on the positive. yea im kinda switching from poetry to the whole rap thing, still feeling the shit out.

imma youth man, soon to be grown up/
on my gorwn up shit, yea i smoke up/
Day n nite i toke up/
freeing my mind my soul but the time/
trying to get heard of/
big words not needed, so not used/
all samll talk, to try to hint the clues/
try to let you see thru my eyes/
of my late night filled with my ...

Your not alone im right here with you smokin hopein to one day be spoken as ispiration cause we all toke and dream on day will make it famous and one day know as the lastest new new cool cool kid on the block spitting ryhmes that every listen to. i just want to let you know your not the only i feel ...

dig your style

Why are things never what they seem, i rather lay asleep one of those perfect dreams
Something bout her rest within mind
Shes the only thing to vision once i shut my eyes
I feel happiness and missery both the same time some more green just to free the mind
All day big high big fried dumb but same ...

Whats up i just go by Rj im a poet/writer speak my heart and a addict of writtin but got a habbit of smoking.