thanks yo im goin of a raw wu tang style i kno what u mean by the "ugh vibe" im gunna work on it, i appriciate the feed back

my first written lines...


the lack of profanity
reduces insanity
in todays humanity
witch entices my appetite for hommage
causing the rommage
so i turn to R Z A
for his sauteed rap souflee
it portrays a buffet
that could make the esse jose obay
the lyrical disarray
thats dropped from ...