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Conflicts plague me like a Sierra Leone diamond,
Always swimming upstream like a spawning salmon.
But look into a diamond’s soul
And see a dying man’s soul.
It feels like that’s all they rap for, a diamond piece.
At the club, I spied a dime piece
With an ass that was redic,
So I hit it twice ...

My pen’s the needle, the paper’s the vial
What I’ve got to say makes people tune their dials.
Each verse I bleed out is a lil part of me
Something I leak out for you and the world to see.
I hear what’s getting air play, it’s like they trying to change the game
And it feel like the radio ain’t the ...

Qwarterz
What do you mean by expanding? Are you talking about the metaphors or what?

Ok thanks man

Unemployment’s on the rise
Everyone’s hoping for a savior, eyes to the skies
But it’s like mirror, it reflects their eyes
Some understand, others give up
Return to their couch, wait for others to pick them up
Never understanding, they’re their own catalyst
They don’t put in work, hands uncaloused ...

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Home is where the heart is
But home is my darkness.
On my way there I remember-
Why I left here,
My burden I could no longer bear.
They said lean on me
But instead I weaned off thee.
Uprooting myself from what I knew,
Thinking I could start anew
But what I did was I blew
Away the morals I used to ...