Thanks for your advices, i will try to make it better next time!

Hi everyone.. Im Ramzi, the lyricist from Azerbaijan, my name is Ramiz, im 24, i looked around for a good site to post my lyrics in english, despite the fact that english is my 3rd language, i try my best to write rhymes in it, and hopefully i'll succed.. I love hip-hop music, i appreciate many ...

My lyrics are kinda sophisticated, many say they get emaciated
Year by year my words are maturating, intellectually saturated..
My wisdom is a river with underwater flows in it,
I'm wealthy, but my treasure can't be measured in digits,
I'm not really amazed with rap, i think nowdays it's crap ...