It's been the same state of mind, probably why I can't find
A perfect way to rhyme, on a different page with time
Close the book to check the spine, do I got the right volume?
Alarming barrier to break, wall to penetrate this song through
The one I'm walking along to with a spectrum that's all to ...

Overall, the content was promising, the only downside is that you really didn't indulge further into anything, you started off then moved on to something different. I think if you draw some of the lines a bit further out it would give you more of an opportunity to do so and will also help you build ...

Really liked the rhyme scheme you used, the flow was really on point, a little bit towards the end when the lines started to wear thin took away from the flow a little bit, but it was still very evident.

Also liked the vocab you used, obviously on a topic like this you shouldn't be using an excess ...