Ok I'm still a n00b at this, but anyways heres something I wrote a lil while ago. I'm not sure why I dislike 50 cent, just never liked him :P

You got the bling bling,
where'd you got them?
Flea market in Bejing?
Now, that's priceless.
What about your rhymes,
got 'em off Cypress Hill?
He's got ...

thanks so much thadevious1 and Grimm Gonna check out those albums!

Thanks a bunch everyone really appreciate it

Thanks for the tips! :D English isnt my first language so need to improve my vocabulary a bit I think hehe.
Is this a tad better?:
Feels so awkward when I open my mouth and try to rhyme
feelin like a fatso at mcdonalds without a dime
But being bad at rhyming has never been a crime
So shut it all ...

thanks for the feedback! I'm just writing for fun really

Not kidding, so that's why it may sound a bit corny :roll: Here it goes:

I take a look into the mirror
See myself getting older than I wanna be
I sit back and think of times when I felt free
I was a kid with big dreams, you see
And thinking they would all come true so easily
Nah, I couldnt be more ...