This battle was overall weak, bd you could've definitly came much harder...lance for a first battle you did pretty well, you have the basic idea so now work on all aspects of your writing and you will be ...
I ain't trying to hate on u but that reminds me of some lil Wayne type shit n I despise lil wayne. You need to add more substance to your rhymes to liven them up. Pick a topic cus ppl r bored with hearin about a dudes swag n their doe etc. Throw in some metas wordplay n punchlines n ull have a ...
Personals/nameflips- Kause...u had a couple more flips Punches- Kause..neither wowed me but I found his a lil funnier Mulities- 32..pretty obvious..32s drop was packed compared to kause's Meta's/wordplay- none...unless you gonna count 32s. Nameflips Structure/flow- kause..was much easier to follow ...
Wiz u had nothing against ya opponent. So I can barely call ur drop a battle verse.
Kause I've seen much better drops from u. But u atleast had used a nameflip
So mvgt kause mc
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