soons I heard the beat, it reminded me of this skit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkq2jJRx5gY

I like the simple beat. I woulda liked the freestyle a bit slower, less words maybe; a simple rhyme to go with it(something like a Too Short rap).

Loon E Lou: thanks for the effort, trying to give me a feed and all. I really appreciate it. I'm glad that you got it to flow well on a random beat. Not really surprising though since I usually match up my rhymes and beats randomly until I find the right feel for the words. Thanks again for trying ...

feeds(this how it works? I forget):
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/made-feat-young-joe-vt22152.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/make-you-proud-vt11614-15.html

the last recording I did.

EDIT: i uploaded a different version of this track. Not much different but it's the one I put on the ...

the beat caught me right away (i have to get better at beat making) and you've got this chill flow. Very chilled out track. I've listened to it a couple times so it's definitely good. I'll have to read the lyrics soon

i listened to this one cause the name Young Joe jumped out at me (reminds me of a dj white mike tape). You've got a great flow; very reminiscent of tyga from young money but much much less annoying than him. sounds so pro; good on you

Whats up kennedycurse?
heading back to work in a min.

I have a page with download links to my tapes (+lyrics, thoughts etc).

http://thisworldisntimportanttome.blogspot.com/

Where did you learn about the site?
Thanks to a google search, I arrived here mid-2010 when I'd just started writing ...