much appreciated thanks for the time and tips. i know what your saying about the beat, then im thinking what if whoever is reading has a different beat in their head haha jk, if you flow you flow the beat wont matter. you pegged it right im new to writing its just for fun and like free therapy ...

[when im bored i like to write so thanks for reading and any feedback]


ponder and learn from the now if u can / but since u livin its a skill i would value at ten / on the richter as the clock hand continues to move / you stop to think just like you normally do /

watch the mind eye like a tv set ...

This is fire. best part i thought - raw intuition---->mixed with premeditation//the sickest of intentions "lost in translation"//. All dope im new here but lovin the words. Keep doing what you do.

Whats up im new here I love to write lyrics and most of all learn. Love music, its essential to life. I think this is dope you have skills. I like how it makes you think, its true to life. I can relate to it, dope. Look forward to reading more.