The Magic Mark - "Gorgeous" Collection - Kurse - 2

[MagicMark]

Kurse's 'Inside the box'..

MagicMix...

This is ma spin on it..


I can't see the reason yo, why i can't kill alot
then have to worry bout being knocked up out the winner's spot
cause i bin as hot as any trash under a heat wave
given legendary status, shit i wrapped it up in 3 days
i get the fans swayin', i see more waves than on a beach day
when opponents fryin' out of their element like a beached whale
these foes get stacked up to be munched down like a sumo's food
cause they seem to have learnt punchin, sittin' n' watchin' in a judo school
karma's a fickle bitch, so you have to slap and tickle it
fail to make her happy, n' she'll whack you down some wicked shit
everytime i filled the nine, i seemed to fill a will to die
if you have a death wish, she's a genie n' she will comply
it's bin a while since a sin of mine, got me thinkin' "that mayne is awful"
but every day i battle cats, till that dude's pant stains is orphans
my rants drain endrophins, god can't kill me, i got him fearin'
if he send his son imma stab him, if he send tha holy ghost, imma spear-it
are ya'll niggas hearin'? karma? my opponents shouldn't be beliven'
if 50 didn't deserve to die, then 50 did, so i guess that makes us even..


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*"Breakin' News on the IllestLyrics Board... MagicMark has lost battle 17, in a row... a stunnin' upset once again.. can we keep callin' them upsets at this point?.... i dunno... he had this to say on the matter"*...

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A while ago i was all for killin' foes and rippin' hoes
now i hold the bed clothes, and im grippin' those..... close to me
reminding myself this aint how it's supposed to be.. im as close to beast
you know how many pro's i've beat? used to be, cats couldn't get a pole to me
now they beatin' me? damn.. i thought i was a long haul veteran
now i know im a false icon, just one step to fall off pedestals
now ma rhymes fade, behind 'shades', turned into to one of those 'blind' greats
karmas tricked me to a state of mind, thought i was every thing my mind states
now my prime's fake, kurse preachin' that he'd soon be dead
why did i have to kill em'? and take the curse off his 'goofy' head (lol)


i hate my comp.. that'll have to do lol..

[MagicMark]

uppin this piece, thanks for the feed in number 1 too..

[Brah-Vo]

Im gonna make it my personal vendetta to feed you on the whole gorgeous collection. just because im curious.

Personally i think this was hot as hell. Ya flow was on point and you really held the topic throughout.
I like how you brought us into your psyche when it comes to not living up to expectations and for me this piece was pretty deep. Thouroughly enjoyed the read.

[Cee4]

this one was pretty good too. a lot less goin on than the first one but you had nice wordplay here and it was a smooth read

[Jesodist]

Mark always drops sick shit i cant believe people cant recognize it. I dropped a 2nd 100 bars and no one commented on it. Seems like motherfuckers really got issues with me. But you had some nice rhymes here Mark nothing new tho but the rap has a lil complex shit in it. Good drop bro.

[- Mutual -]

"THIS SITE IS AN EMBARASSMENT" ^

GTFO!!

anyway nice piece here
hadda dope flow and feeling
to each an every bar
it's a good start to the 'Gorgeous' collection
it sets a great set up for people to read the rest
okay dude great read hot shit here
keep'em comin