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GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 3:29 am

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/juice ... tml#113733

Ring the bells of hell the king has fell into the snakepit/
basement - legion so debased and they wasted/
faces - grimacing in anger and in hatred/
matrix, born into a world where nothins sacred/
bluffin with no aces, erased in the flesh - god/
sacrifce my breath til nothin left but these fresh scars/
flex hard - shadows got me parrow in the citadel/
the sickle fell like lashing tongues - right where my spittle dwells/
pictures tell a thousand tales, i beg i choose a true one/
proven - before its time for gunslingers to move on/
you son - can view a million new suns - illuminate/
a universe of unique versed text by this fluent Great/
shooting straight - stars becoming particles on impact/
syntax - my elements of grammar leave your chin cracked/
tin hats - my armour for these theories of conspiracy/
lyrically i give the gift of hearin what my spirit see...

all feedback appreciated...1.

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:31 am

Another dope drop as far as text goes that is audio compatible you have a sick ass handle on your flow

GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:58 pm

good looks K

GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:59 pm

^^^^lets get some feed

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:48 am

this was good
dope multies
it flowed well
not too choppy anywhere
real complexity felt heart felt
lol if you get my drift
this as overall incredibly good
full of complex rhymes
keep'em comin

GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:38 am

thanks for the feed......

GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:43 am

thanks for the feed man.....

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