Cyphers

[TheBigHurt~]

comments wanted. crit for crit.

Im proudly rockin a shroud, like im the holiest of holies.
im your bitchs new god now, when she worship she worship slowly.
if your too slow to get a clue of what im saying
put my swagga on the the scale, it doesnt lie i promise you can weigh me
my flow breaths fire my rhymes are dragons that im slaying.
i growl just to let you know that im a monster.
my style so new to you like australian beer call it foster.
i hear the bitch saying shit like couch potato breeze.
Lil Pinchy's got his crown you better get on your knees.
Got flow so cool better get your coat or else you freeze
my ride so sick better hold your nose or else you'll sneeze
if ya raise a hand ill gak ya sista brother and your nease.
ill leave their bodies all around call it 2009 the tradgedy.
tell the teacher you'll be late for class make ya permanatly absentee.
After the blunt I light up a black label salem
Burn it at the stake, now im on to bitchs and mayhem.
Murder. Cry wolf, make the bitchs howl when they see me.
Your feet cant fit these shoes, extra large swagga that cant fit the chiminey
Lake Village born and raised, bitch better catch up or get mayoniesed.
Get the class kiddies before I leave you in a dorm daze.
I can be the teacher and you can be my student.
Now I know all of that’s a mouthful, fill ya up like Patrick chewing.
Take it easy my flow goin fuck up your mandible,
Pinchy times pie, im off the scale, im not tangible
perceptible by the senses especially the sense of touch
incredible senseless game, aimin for the fence, leave ya with a crutch

[eMCee Havic]

this was allright for some cypher shit, i wouldnt mind see an actual written from you.. but this was allright it flowed for the most part. not reall complex or anything but than again it was a cypher.

over all i give it a 2 outta 5 mics. could use alot of improvement..

hit me back with the feed back on my piece

peace