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Freestyle(FEED PLS)

Post by ReCkinAll »

iight....

ayo you can hate all you want this teams risin/
wit a greed to teach violence those weak proceed to keep silent/
or an ass woopin paralyzed and such yes analyze as much/
till you land inside the trunk!
but granted massive damage once you landed face first/
havin to taste dirt and every second havin it taste worst/
the treatment for the weakest ones/
that need it i aint leavin some/
why switch the style i'll rip for miles to some either drums/
bein ahead of a bunch wit an adreniline rush that can crush/
ten of you fucks with the press of your luck/
hopes and dreams is wat you dopes believe/
and hopefully so we'll see if you can comprehend and concentrate/
or drop the pen and lock the gate/..........

sumthin off the top....
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Post by eMCee Havic »

nice key homie, a lil short but thats fine, it was pretty dope tho, uppin to see more of you work and rhymes
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

mos def too short homie.. once i got into it it was over but it was dope nice lines, nice flow i think the first half was better but when u picked back up it ended
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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