New rapper, just written somethin down, let me know

[Explicit59]

so high i'm at the skies with tentacles
tactic magic flow leavin people inedible
where else i'l be yo, i just go up
uppin, so sick maybe i'll just throw up

i'm blowin up, rhymes igniten in my mind
fighten with my pride, two solders up high
and no time, so now i bomb the clock tower
let the mist fall, my heart bloom flowers

the smell in my heart may keep you noisy
i'll fry your nose cause that's what my mind told me
my father, a generater for makin lyrics
the illest,new rapper, "Explicit"

[eMCee Havic]

like the endin, that was really the only part that stood out to me. good structure and flow though. nice key homie..

peace

[Doctrine Prodigy]

im new too, nice flow
we shud battle sometime, battle of the newcomers
peace

[-MenaCe-]

^^NOw YOu JUst WAiT a mINutE hE hAS A BaTtLE oN HIs hANdS WItH mE tHAT hE's DUcKiN!!

[Mac]

Lol ^^^

Good Shit Man, My Favorite Part Of Being On Illest Is Watching Artist Grow And Highten Their Peak. Hopefully You'll Continue To Drop And Grow As A Artist. Good Shit Though Man, Stay At It Home Boy.

[Momeijah]

The 1st And Last Sections Stood Out To Me The Most, End Bar Was Pretty Witty. Each Part Had it's Standouts (Like The Clock Tower Line On The Second Part). Flow Was Solid, u Have a Pretty Smooth Style Just Work at it.

[$harky]

Yeah man wicked shit man. I really liked it. it Had some real good elements to it.

Yeah And I want a battle or two too.

Peace out

[Explicit59]

thanks everyone,and yea i'll be on for a bit,