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"Untitled"

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i have a history of violence traveled to 9 islands
smoked and rolled eye lids never held a long silence
walk hundreds of miles in shell toes and worn "nikes"
drank bottles on a nightly bought things that be pricey
done drugs to delight me been a gemini wit a picese
had court judges deny me an lock me away behind bars
i've sat on a starless night wit the time to find stars
i've been through 5 cars trafficed ganj in nine jars
followed love with a blind heart an fell behind starts
lived a lot and loss a lot got cornered an tossed a cop
had thoughts to pause an stop got drunk an suaced a lot
had neignbors that called the cops jail can cost a lot
i've fucked an been fucked over never been stuck sober
a crazy youngin an young stoner still runnin amuck older
got in fights an sluged solgiers and i'm still not done yet
theres still other sunsets hot bitches to have dumb sex
there'll always be some shit and more rhymes to publish
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has a smooth flow to it
maybe not as lyrical as some of ya others
although is still is pretty good
nice multies here an there
over all smooth i likd it
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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this is a decent drop IMO..liked most of the scheme...
some lines hit harder than otheres...but all in all
i felt some emotion in there...1

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Post by K KiLLaH »

flow fell off in the middle but i like the theme n rhymescheme
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Word, Started Off Hard Then It Seemed Like You Fell Off A Little Bit But I Liked The Topical An Where You Was Going With It, Over All A Good Read, Keep droppin My Dude.
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Post by -MenaCe- »

Nice Drop..

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