-6BoNeS0- vs. Sceritz (Sceritz 3-0)

[sceritz]

4 bars/ 8 lines
no recycles/bites
detailed votes please
drop in 24 hours after check

*check*

[BennyBones]

check

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:26 pm --

the chances of u winning this fight/
is as close as ellen turin stait and michael comin to life/

'yo sombody help the kid before he turns suidcidle
tonight'.../
he seems like a good guy.. wouldn't want to ruin his life/

even tho he just found out his moms could of swallowed him twice/
damn!..

im sorta like aj cause ill make you bums pay the price/
then give u advice on better ways to rap as nice/

my fault i shouldn't give jesus second thoughts on redemandin ya life/
even if u could walk on water id' spit snd hit u wit ice/chill...
"case closed"

"scer-sceritz"- mic check one two one two/
"scer-sceritz"- mic check one two/

"scer-sceritz"- mic check one two one two/
"scer-sceritz"- mic check what chu-gon-do/



lmao............get at me!!!blaowwwwww.....

-6BoNeS0-

[sceritz]

yo, i'll drop as soon as i get back to the crib, i'm on the go, but i'll drop real soon, before the it gets too late fa sho

-- Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:48 pm --

Ok Here we go...

yo

I’m sonnin’ dude, like the truth of vader/
you can say I’m killin’ six/sicks like Euthanasia! (start of the end)
Who can save ya? Look, your time is at a close kid/
Ya know bones weak like osteoporosis!/
Ouch, he so ferocious, a battlin’ wiz/
And I’ll break 6 bones like a bat to the ribs!/ (ouch!)
How he got his name, happened like this.../
6 bones likes to take 6 boners, a habit of his!/ (finished)

bring 'em out...

[MOEstradamus]

color=#FF0000]bones[/color]
the chances of u winning this fight/
is as close as ellen turin stait and michael comin to life/
ok this is a very weak punch and last bar stretched out your flow 1/5
'yo sombody help the kid before he turns suidcidle
tonight'.../
he seems like a good guy.. wouldn't want to ruin his life/
big filler didn't even punch at all flow was there 2/5
even tho he just found out his moms could of swallowed him twice/
damn!..
another weak punch and wat da hell is dis 4 bars and a line???? 2/5
im sorta like aj cause ill make you bums pay the price/
then give u advice on better ways to rap as nice/
ok a little punch not much here flow was off 2/5
my fault i shouldn't give jesus second thoughts on redemandin ya life/
even if u could walk on water id' spit snd hit u wit ice/chill...
"case closed"
ok your best line of your verse to me but weak still 3/5
total 10/25 or 40% yo man work on your flow and set ups and try some more creative wordplay man and metaphors and multis itll really help ur flow and battle if you need help ask around i know them arv is great with them so is hazard and killah so ask around to perfect your style and keep tryin at it


sceritz
I’m sonnin’ dude, like the truth of vader/
you can say I’m killin’ six/sicks like Euthanasia! (start of the end)
flow was off in the the punch but ur opener was better and ur wordplay on his name was good with da punch so ima give u a 3/5
Who can save ya? Look, your time is at a close kid/
Ya know bones weak like osteoporosis!/
another play on his name and punch flow again was a lil off but good punch 3/5
Ouch, he so ferocious, a battlin’ wiz/
And I’ll break 6 bones like a bat to the ribs!/ (ouch!)
flow was there but not really a punch at all 1/5 on ur filler
How he got his name, happened like this.../
6 bones likes to take 6 boners, a habit of his!/ (finished)
ok flow was way off and forced here and punch was played as fuck 1/5

8/20 or 40% ok so it is the same so ill break it down by cats and man you need to stop with fillers and forced rhymes cuz your 1st 2 bars where about to take u to the win but you lost it with the last 2 fillers

opener-sceritz got it
wordplay-sceritz took it bones had none
personals-niether
flow-tie both were choppy
creativity-scertiz got it becuz his was kinda outside the box in the first 2 bars
entertainment-niether really didn't have fun really reading either
closer-bones cuz sceritz was forced as fuck
total-4-2

voteSCERITZ

man it was a close battle just sceritz first to bars won it for him but he almost lost it due to his last two fillers... anyway you both need to try and use multis in ur rhymes thats y i didn't put multis in da cats cuz it woulda been a niether.... anyway ask around or just keep battlin your get it and you guys will start winnin like crazy keep up the good work tho

[sceritz]

thanks, honestly though i do use more mutlies... and the flow WAS on cuz i did it in my head over some beats (i'm never off beat) but i do know watcha mean i think my lines were coming out too short or something... i think its the music i was listening to that day or something was throwin' me off lol.. but yea i feel you, thanks.

[MOEstradamus]

sorry for da free post but yo if u write with a beat post the song so ppl can listen to it while they read it so they can hear it wit da beat it may help out i think

[K KiLLaH]

Cat Sweep Sceritz, This Wasn't Close at All... Sceritz Join Battle League Ill Have a Match For You Tommorow!!

[BennyBones]

idk i thout it was strait i rush though my shit so give me a lil slack dont really got a lot of computer time but i no excuses... i might start usin some beats to have a tempo and help yall out a lil but my verses i drop are all acapella.... so it is what it is get at me and oh yeah the tempo i used was off that 8-mile battle the last one

-- Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:54 pm --

[K KiLLaH]

well look at sceritz verse n be honest like ya opener was good then you fell off im my opinion aka IMO but anyways UPPIN FOR MORE VOTES!! 2-0 Sceritz

[-MenaCe-]

Cat Sweep Sceritz..

Bones you need to improve on your wordplay and creativity and you'll be iight...

V/Sceritz

[LunGzZ]

I’m sonnin’ dude, like the truth of vader/
you can say I’m killin’ six/sicks like Euthanasia! (start of the end)
Who can save ya? Look, your time is at a close kid/
Ya know bones weak like osteoporosis!/
Ouch, he so ferocious, a battlin’ wiz/
And I’ll break 6 bones like a bat to the ribs!/ (ouch!)


bring 'em out...

Dude that was fucking DOPE shit my dude, retarded flow and punches. Sick motherfucking shit man.

[K KiLLaH]

3-0 good job Sceritz -Closed and UpDated-