Rising Stars (exclusive JJunior and Qwarterzone Collab)

[DaPrince]

Fresh on the scene, I've got lines unique
with a rhyme technique so clean it squeaks
my lines speak with the physique of a medieval greek
I don't believe in fatigue or concede to defeat
I'm on a streak to the peak, a plot to the top
Several drops cuz idle hands are the devil's workshop
neither settles nor stops my brain's like kettles or pots
impelled to develop what's hot like photo-shots of my thoughts
My stable's a yacht, I see hoards of waves
and record on the page, a fluid chord in a phrase
It's an emotional daze, or moment of clarity
like Odin used a pair of lightning bolts to name an heir to be
An unfair oddity...rare? it got to be...
I'm the fuel (fewl) in flawlessly apparently I'm a commodity
It's astonishing, honestly, it's the darnedest thing
I'm conning leprechauns out of luck I'm so charming





With the angel pen I right wrong, elegance of the white swan
Bite like a python use sonic flows whenever my sights gone
Fight with high arch, Qwarter swifter then Jet Li, slice bars
Fuck who the better MC I could prove what a veteran be
Whatever I dream, a Hero working on his lettering technique
Nouns and facts, represent the world with the profoundest raps
While they denounce his ass, they got Paris Hilton flow in a House Of Wax
Countin’ stacks, baller claims, find them hung up on the wall of shame
While I stroll down the halls of fame, steppin’ on stars swagger like walk of fame
Hard to stray when I’ma dart to brains, slow motion Rhino hearts enlaced
I’m too far out their range, fact is peril, gold linen with the rap of pharaoh
Dark Nights bat apparel, light that of the Pharos, I guide lines smoke that’ll scare
crows
play the Joker seeing pressures, words my drug and I’m Heathing Ledgers
stoned or not, I kick out the grave, breakin’ blocks down my sweetest pleasure (Haaaa)

[Riggz]

"play the Joker seeing pressures, words my drug and I’m Heathing Ledgers"...funny, I just used a Heath Ledger Metaphore in my verse earlier against Quix... what a coincidence.

Anywayz I saw hints of multis a Jr.'s flow was a tad off at the ending, but the beginning and middle were very smooth.. liked the "Several drops cuz idle hands are the devil's workshop" line.

QZ started off strong but your bars got longer at the end as your bars became less self explainatory

I'm assuming this was a chatbox key...
Room for improvement (as we all are...)

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