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Till infinity 30

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Theres A lot of people that wanna Hear Me Flow
Here we Go tired of That Mary Dough
Under Fire Cause that Weary Po
my legs say Cheerio My Head says bury yo
Berry show bonds With the undaground
Don't run it down, don't wait ta help
even weights wud you needa carry - mo
occupy both shoulders like 2 stereos
dumping frowns amongst ya town
almost booked as kid but not youngsta bound
Real man mind state Run it Now
Don't wanna hear another persons Stomach sound
So i buy whoever food like here munch it down
Steve Biko passive resistant .. in the Steps
Sinning Less..,Dry Coughing often thats the winna breath
devils up? Points down I'ma intercept
Hopefully i run in 2 heaven when i run inta death
True intellect want a epidemic Then skin the flesh
Watch the tree's Blow Figure out what they inta Next
Snow Flakes in a Motion, Cold fate in The Potion
Solidness is Being Shaped Like The Ocean..
Can Never drift 2 Far Escaping the Moment..
symbol ties symbolize certain Hand shaking Is Potent
Stronga tensor, Longa Venture Along with a Censor
Getting rid of People Prolonging Dispensers
Cause awareness ain't Cherished bet the Governments
Aware we will parish No crane to Lift us while their
parrots in Paris, Look at high school conceptions
who's caring for Marriage? Take a walk down the street
Peep the dude at them stairs with his carriage
Reflections of the stares is embarrassed ...
Like he Chose his path.. I Ain't Caring Ta Hear It..
But He .. Counts For Something 2,
Moneys True Counting Up Fa You, If you Heading Down
Fountain Up The View riding with age amazed If Bouncing 22
Hugging groups of women , shouting out the Crew
When the doubts is out i'm drew, stencils , sketches
giving paintings mouth to mouth till theres dental wreckage
The presidential message, said Anythings Possible, Impossible
Na Logical, what they ain't mention is every things stoppable
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Re: Till infinity 30

Post by complexity »

I'll be honest. This isn't the kind of writing that I've appreciated you writing lately.

The whole first 8 bars, really didn't say anything to me, I realize that it was all wordplay, but it gets to a point where you're saying nothing, and if you say nothing at all, its not worth reading.

"Sinning Less..,Dry Coughing often thats the winna breath
devils up? Points down I'ma intercept
Hopefully i run in 2 heaven when i run inta death
True intellect want a epidemic Then skin the flesh"

Then you dropped that, which was impressive.

"When the doubts is out i'm drew, stencils , sketches
giving paintings mouth to mouth till theres dental wreckage
The presidential message, said Anythings Possible, Impossible
Na Logical, what they ain't mention is every things stoppable"

That ending bar was nice too.


That's about all I have to say. The whole marriage speel; showed lack of direction.
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