Catch me if you can

[DaPrince]

Routinely I shock and I got schemes and plots
that stream from my top down to the seams in my socks
I could beast every drop with a pen ink and my thoughts
or i can get as deep as Marines leaping with screams off of docks
the belief that I'm weak is a critique I've never forgot
it provokes the quotes that I wrote and every drop that I got
It's like they tell me stop, but quit's not in my dataset
I'm quick to vent and I spent and hatin's been the catalyst
I crafted this massive list of events from my history
to present the incentive me myself and I are experiencing
Reminiscing about the times I was subjected to ridicule
in public just made a fool, disgusted with my whole school...
I didn't act like a thug so those cats showed me no love
their definition of black was more skewed than trial facts about gloves
...it didn't fit me, but still they wanted perpetuated stereotypes
but instead of sinking to their level I perfected aerial flight.
My creative cuisine's undoubtedly regal at points
I'm the complexity king compared to their value meal joints
Been crowned and annointed, created sinlessness right on
every page, when I spit it's like a venomous python
if you've witnessed, you can't deny I'm like a soldier ready for war
I'll confetti your spinal chord with my machette's and swords
I stay steady with metaphors, yea my arsenal of words
can diverge nerves in the hearts of even cardinal birds
I slaughter with verbs, I was distinguished at birth
to extinguish concerns, relinquish kings and usurp
no my verse isn't perfect but its certaintly exceptional
I'm unequalled, it's absurd if you think we're symmetrical

[Munteskue_lol]

Pftt this shit was filthy dogg

Feelin' it

[FlipSide]

no my verse isn't perfect but its certaintly exceptional
I'm equalled, it's absurd if you think we're symmetrical

Nothing much to say but that last quote sums it up.... lots of quotables just too lazy to quote...but i read n liked... hot

[complexity]

Routinely I shock and I got schemes and plots
that stream from my top down to the seams in my socks
I could beast every drop with a pen ink and my thoughts
or i can get as deep as Marines leaping with screams off of docks

Oh. With them lines alone, you stepped your game up another notch

the belief that I'm weak is a critique I've never forgot
it provokes the quotes that I wrote and every drop that I got

Perfect..

It's like they tell me stop, but quit's not in my dataset
I'm quick to vent and I spent and hatin's been the catalyst
I crafted this massive list of events from my history
to present the incentive me myself and I are experiencing
Reminiscing about the times I was subjected to ridicule
in public just made a fool, disgusted with my whole school...
I didn't act like a thug so those cats showed me no love
their definition of black was more skewed than trial facts about gloves

All of that was very confusing lyrically.

...it didn't fit me, but still they wanted perpetuated stereotypes
but instead of sinking to their level I perfected aerial flight.

Ill.

My creative cuisine's undoubtedly regal at points
I'm the complexity king compared to their value meal joints

Subliminal? I noticed this when I read it the first time.

Been crowned and annointed, created sinlessness right on
every page, when I spit it's like a venomous python

Good rhyming.

if you've witnessed, you can't deny I'm like a soldier ready for war
I'll confetti your spinal chord with my machette's and swords

Great.

I stay steady with metaphors, yea my arsenal of words
can diverge nerves in the hearts of even cardinal birds
I slaughter with verbs, I was distinguished at birth
to extinguish concerns, relinquish kings and usurp
no my verse isn't perfect but its certaintly exceptional
I'm unequalled, it's absurd if you think we're symmetrical

Good mathematical concept.

Overall. You've come along way. What I've noticed in your last 3-6 drops is that you have some very quotable bars. That is scary because when you start having completely quotable drops then you're going to be one of the best writers this site has ever seen. I see a lot of similarities between you and J Haze.

[DaPrince]

The part about "their definition of black was more skewed than trial facts about gloves...it didnt fit me", is suppose to be a reference to the OJ case. And also nah that wasn't a subliminal I just liked the comparison between a complex cuisine and a (fast food) value meal.

The feed is much appreciated though, I've been playing with some new rhyme schemes and it's been working out so I'm glad it shows.