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deaf/blind/gen/normal collab with my brother

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me n my brother collab with that
deafshady-
I met a blind man once, explained something in gist
he said if seeing is believing, then faith doesn't exist
i never understood what punishment is, he said.....

bro-
There isn't anything I miss, listen I'll begin
hearing sounds all around and the whisper in the wind
it's a profound thing, a ping's wondrous because,
mere foot falls to me are like the thundering of drums
you couldn't understand it's not something I planned
I experience life through the touch of my hands
they paint images within, crafted in light
they're all that I have besides the absence of sight
I Imagine wondrous colors, the rest are all shown
red, blue, green.. just things I'll never have known

deafshady
to ask if he was kidding, seemed to be the cruelest joke
I laughed a little bit, he couldn't see the humor though
moving slow -i crossed the road, on the next damn street........
i heard a deaf man speak, and i couldn't figure him out
his syllables sound, like words were to big to fit in his mouth
I'm listening pal, is what i said and felt a little bit helpless
gave him paper and a pencil, didnt wanna seem ignorant -selfish
he wrote..

deafshady-
Where are the selfless
when you're scared and dependant?
This hearing aid feels like a clear and brazen sign I'm impaired of my senses.
Yet I'm fully aware when I'm mentioned, as they stare my direction...
...with an expression of gratitude
their expectant to have from you
for showing the slightest care or affection.
It can be fairly offensive.
You feel like a casualty trapped beneath their glare of pretences.
So is this where we are heading?

bro-
I sensed he was friendly, as he tried mumbling under his breath
I'm not here to pass judgment, hell -my youngest brother is deaf
so i have utter respect, especially when i practically raised him
disappointed when we talk, cause i never practiced his language
tipped my hat -started straying, then bumped into a voiceless chick
and i read what she said, by reading her moistened lips... it went..

deafshady=
I've been kissed by the shackles of stupidity on my wrists,
Thoughts exist but thru ur impatience, they're dismissed.
Some try to insist that my gift is bliss and not a diss
But the static in my mind persists with its deafening hiss
Lost in silent abyss....this mumbling mute has no clue
Face two shades of blue, so many things i should say to you
I can't see through you, taken advantage of at every turn
Fuck bell curves, I can't learn, my mind never churns
But my feelings stay burned, yo my heart doesn't beat slow!
Genuine affection I show, love runs through me head to toe
You should know, I hear every whisper and feel every glare
Life's unfair but at least God spared me the voice of despair

bro-
she was gorgeous -i swear, I couldn't believe those people
seen as equal, but they all see no -hear no -speak no evils
now clearly this seems true, if you've read all of these words
understand, no matter whats wrong -it can always be worse
damn..
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much props that was the hottest shit
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thanks... for the feed.. i thought this is the best collab ever i have with my brother
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that was rap and poetry id have to say professional. that took time to sculpt u can tell the other things ive read by you are years from this good job
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