written verse for an audio,peep the flow

[Gutta]

You lack the minerals and vitamins
Ladies and gentlemen sit tight as I begin
Because the pen is trembling
And I aint even wrote a sentence yet
But you better bet
Even if my pencil is touched, the page leaks like
A levee that busts and stay breached, runnin through you
Like Jerome Bettis the Bus and AP (Adrian Peterson)
You shoulda known better because I play deep
I need some more cheddar to cut to stay cheesed
I treat ya like the head of a duck I aim, squeeze
Most of yall got flows But not a poet passions,
That’s why im flowin past em, if time is money
We cant chat unless they overdraftin
Plus they low on cash, Baby, we can take it slow
In the Black Mercedez, play it low while I blast the AC
With the bass bumpin, leave ya ear drum buzzin
Cant hear yaself think but the heat’ll hush ya
Comin from the Roof top sniper
Beatin down the beats above ya goin til I see the W

[QwarterZ]

This is actually purdy sick
the flow threw me off a bit in the beginnin'
maybe it's cuz it's for a audio
the beat needs to be there to drow out the niceness
very smooth tho', I like the vibe!
ur elevating a bit, keep writing my dude!

[deafshady]

sick wirting n keep it elevate dude