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step up get messed up got these fuckers feelin pressured
im from the neithers my skill is forever it cant be measured
yall a feather weight ya your here but youll never stay
so hesi-state get split in two like a germ that self repli-cates
you messed with fate opened gates an now ya in devils space
you'll begin ta hate but like 38's all i do is ellim-inate
its purely sin in faith that penitrates and sends ya to the grave
only you can save yourself from these brand new grenades
its youth in age coming str8 gunnin like a green berete'
cuz you my prey eattin candy rappers i can't seem ta wait
beef an steak. i'll finish you like the mob put a hit on you
you bit a dude must be a girl cuz i see tha bitch in you
so lick these jewels not just you i could pick a few
this is new not bitten not recycled i'll leave it wit the typos
i'm a pycho who might go off like an ill tempered rifle
so fly ho jump off hip hops dick an let the real WRITE FLOWs
Last edited by eMCee Havic on Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:26 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Get Bodied

Post by $eR!oU$ SK!LL »

Str8 rawl verse there homey!
I didn't read it.
I flowed it, quickly...like some Bone shit.
Worked out perfectly...mostly cause all them multis.
If I's you, I'd find a quick based Bone type beat and hit an audio with this.
Real shit homey!
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Re: Get Bodied

Post by FlipSide »

step up get messed up got these fuckers feelin pressured
im from the neithers my skill is forever it cant be measured
I just like the way that sounds
yall a feather weight ya your here but youll never stay
so hesi-state get split in two like a germ that self repli-cates
Thats a nice attacking bar...well put together as well
this is new not bitten not recycled i'll leave it wit the typos
i'm a pycho who might go off like an ill tempered rifle
so fly ho jump off hip hops dick an let the real WRITE FLOWs
Those last three lines were solid and carrying a message...seems battle ish...?

Over all a pretty solid drop ...tho a lil..in the middle the flow dropped off ...good read..dope drop
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Post by eMCee Havic »

thanks TOYH and Flip apreciate it


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