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Hypethermia pt2- The Rhymeologist

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Hypethermia pt2- The Rhymeologist

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From the marble halls of the Taj Mahal to Gardens down in Babylon
My name it rings among them all, exotic like I'm Amazon
Am I wrong? A colossus with impossible wit
Every thought unlocked is like a shot for the downtrodden or sick
A pen and a pad, that's all I have, so I just write prescriptions
The Rhymeologist has arrived to give you what you've been missin'
listen, I'm in the business of building lyrical pyramids
so skillful with pencils, believe that I'll leave you riveted
Pivot? no. My pair of favorite rhymes just got you paralyzed
I'm sterilized, I'm clean, I mean, my rhyme-scheme; it's like germicide
so if the beat's infected, I'm elected, won't neglect it
I'm expected to perfect it, I'm the expert that corrects it
If this is mt. olympus in the booth, I'm Zeus
I have no Achilles heel, I'm Thor posing as a youth
The truth is, I don't need a stage, I need a Colosseum
while all the tracks that I attack get stacked in mausoleums.
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Nice verse right here. Way to bring in the vocab and imagery. Really feeling that. Along with the history. The incorporations of the ideas were sick, and you had a solid rhyme scheme. Solid fucking drop, really. On some self-hype shit, but nothing wrong with that from time to time. Looking forward to reading more bro. Keep it going. One.
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Preciate the feed bro.
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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