Quix vs Predator X (Predator Wins 3-0 K.O.)

[Quix]

House rules, 6 bars

due in 24 hours



good luck

[Predator X]

check

[Omega Bill]

Well, the time limits been passed for both battlers. Which offsets deadline vote counts...

So...

If verses aren't posted by September 30th, this topic will be getting locked.

If either or posts a verse, then every 24 hours after the verse is posted, and the opposite battler doesn't drop a verse, the 1 vote for every 24 hour rule will go into effect being you both checked in this battle.

[Predator X]

Bill I halfheartedly checked into this battle knowin Quix hadn't been on for over a day. I ain't seen the nigga on since so close this shit and if he wants to battle me again he can call me out, no worries yo.

[Quix]

yeah, sorry PRedator ... I'll post in the next few hours. As soon as i get home i'll write some shit!


i've been outta town the last couple days, but i got this fam!!







ok look...




i'm a take a bat to your face and BRAKE HIS LEFT CHEEK, cuz your far from real ... you like the FAKEST TEXTCEE
I HATE THIS PEST, HE's about tah go broke ... Cuz we only seeing 'X sell (excel)' when MAKING SPREAD SHEETS

I got better flows, superior punches, any many GREATER INTANGIBLES, my BEHAVIORS, A CANIBAL!
whos winning this? lets think ... Quix will kill Predator cuz 'X-stinks' like ENDANGERED ANIMALS

you shouldn't TALK TAH ME DUDE; you should up your game quick, do it PROPERLLY TOO!
I'LL leave him decesed or killed... cuz he claims it exists ... but 'we can't see his skill' like BROCCOLI ROOTS (you can't see Brocoli roots, but they apparently still exist)

i'll have this chump FALL FROM SHOTS; cuz he's a rat and a snake like nigguhs who CALL THE COPS
you ain't BALL, YOU FLOP! stab you in the stomach, and leave your 'Belly open' like a HAULTER TOP

This newby prolly just here for HYPING HIS MAN, re-read your raps and spend time RE-TYPING THEM-DAMN!
you ain't a g, your hood is whack, plus this faggots allways 'good for trash' like RYCYCLING PLANTS

don't go THINKING YOU BETTER, i can see the Bitch in you .... the PINK IN YAH TEXTURE
sonin this BITCH IS MY PLEASURE; so watch me finish dude, and put the 'metal to X' like DIGGING FOR TREASURE


aigh, G'luck dog!

[Predator X]

Ya gonna be sorry ya came back cause

I'll beat some sense into this retarded fuck when I smash the poor clown
Fuck tapping into his inner genius he'd have to blast the door down
Aight so why call out 'someone who doesn't suck' like ya got a right to compete*
Cause with 20 losses it seems this DICK likes to get beat every night of the week
Why bother nigga ya can't hit me cause everythin ya drop is shitty
When I say 'Q Be' tough y'all know I'm only talkin about Nas's city**
My skill's enormous I ain't need a shitty victim list to make me feel important
It must be real rewarding with 'Q no showing on the board' more than wheel of fortune
Pred's a mean fucker, I'll 'KO Q' faster than I can COCK my beretta G
I guarantee after this you'll see a 'different side of q' like the letter b
Ridin ya tag partner's coat tails bitch boy you know ya wack on a track
It's obvious, Q/cue can't 'stand on his own' so put this nigga 'back on the rack'

*his callout thread was called 'anyone who doesn't suck'
**QB = Queensbridge


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[Ambiguous Realm]

here's a break down cause im nice like that..

Quix -

i'm a take a bat to your face and BRAKE HIS LEFT CHEEK, cuz your far from real ... you like the FAKEST TEXTCEE
I HATE THIS PEST, HE's about tah go broke ... Cuz we only seeing 'X sell (excel)' when MAKING SPREAD SHEETS

nice punch and nameplay, the rhymescheme was koo but the flow kinda skipped in the second line, 5/5

I got better flows, superior punches, any many GREATER INTANGIBLES, my BEHAVIORS, A CANIBAL!
whos winning this? lets think ... Quix will kill Predator cuz 'X-stinks' like ENDANGERED ANIMALS

rhymescheme fucked up at the end by a syllable but nevertheless this was a nice nameplay and pun, 5/5

you shouldn't TALK TAH ME DUDE; you should up your game quick, do it PROPERLLY TOO!
I'LL leave him decesed or killed... cuz he claims it exists ... but 'we can't see his skill' like BROCCOLI ROOTS (you can't see Brocoli roots, but they apparently still exist)

i didn't like any of this, horrible bar 1/5

i'll have this chump FALL FROM SHOTS; cuz he's a rat and a snake like nigguhs who CALL THE COPS
you ain't BALL, YOU FLOP! stab you in the stomach, and leave your 'Belly open' like a HAULTER TOP

played out universal punchline, still a pretty nice bar though 4/5

This newby prolly just here for HYPING HIS MAN, re-read your raps and spend time RE-TYPING THEM-DAMN!
you ain't a g, your hood is whack, plus this faggots allways 'good for trash' like RYCYCLING PLANTS

played universal, nothin special and i hated the rhymescheme to feed the pun, 2/5

don't go THINKING YOU BETTER, i can see the Bitch in you .... the PINK IN YAH TEXTURE
sonin this BITCH IS MY PLEASURE; so watch me finish dude, and put the 'metal to X' like DIGGING FOR TREASURE

i've seen this this concept for people with X in their name's before, played out, but the rhymescheme was koo, flow was decent3/5

Total: 20/30


Predator X -

I'll beat some sense into this retarded fuck when I smash the poor clown
Fuck tapping into his inner genius he'd have to blast the door down

so-so, nothin special at all 1/5

Aight so why call out 'someone who doesn't suck' like ya got a right to compete*
Cause with 20 losses it seems this DICK likes to get beat every night of the week

5/5 nice personal

Why bother nigga ya can't hit me cause everythin ya drop is shitty
When I say 'Q Be' tough y'all know I'm only talkin about Nas's city**

decent, i thought you were going to do a quarter back nameplay, would've been nicer, overall decent 3/5

My skill's enormous I ain't need a shitty victim list to make me feel important
It must be real rewarding with 'Q no showing on the board' more than wheel of fortune

this was nice, good rhymescheme, and pun 5/5

Pred's a mean fucker, I'll 'KO Q' faster than I can COCK my beretta G
I guarantee after this you'll see a 'different side of q' like the letter b

decent letter/nameplay, decent bar overall as well 3/5

Ridin ya tag partner's coat tails bitch boy you know ya wack on a track
It's obvious, Q/cue can't 'stand on his own' so put this nigga 'back on the rack'

played out pun but delivered nicely, 4/5

Total: 21/30


punches:quix
personals:predator x
flow:predator x

vote: predator x

good battle guys, pretty damn close battle but predator edged this one out

[- Mutual -]

i'm a take a bat to your face and BRAKE HIS LEFT CHEEK, cuz your far from real ... you like the FAKEST TEXTCEE
I HATE THIS PEST, HE's about tah go broke ... Cuz we only seeing 'X sell (excel)' when MAKING SPREAD SHEETS

not the best for the flow i have to be honest but ya know i liked this, nice punch line 8/10

I got better flows, superior punches, any many GREATER INTANGIBLES, my BEHAVIORS, A CANIBAL!
whos winning this? lets think ... Quix will kill Predator cuz 'X-stinks' like ENDANGERED ANIMALS

flow was alot better on this and the punchline wasnt great i liked the wordplay but it aint really anything to impactful i have to be honest about it but a nice bar none the less 9/10

you shouldn't TALK TAH ME DUDE; you should up your game quick, do it PROPERLLY TOO!
I'LL leave him decesed or killed... cuz he claims it exists ... but 'we can't see his skill' like BROCCOLI ROOTS (you can't see Brocoli roots, but they apparently still exist)

nothin amazing on this flow was aiight with the multies 5/10

i'll have this chump FALL FROM SHOTS; cuz he's a rat and a snake like nigguhs who CALL THE COPS
you ain't BALL, YOU FLOP! stab you in the stomach, and leave your 'Belly open' like a HAULTER TOP

yeah this wasnt bad the flow was aiight i suppose, universal punchline didnt make as strong an impact as you would have wanted 7/10

This newby prolly just here for HYPING HIS MAN, re-read your raps and spend time RE-TYPING THEM-DAMN!
you ain't a g, your hood is whack, plus this faggots allways 'good for trash' like RYCYCLING PLANTS

damm i dont like this bar man, the flow was off and it seemed pretty generic as a line in all honesty 4/10

don't go THINKING YOU BETTER, i can see the Bitch in you .... the PINK IN YAH TEXTURE
sonin this BITCH IS MY PLEASURE; so watch me finish dude, and put the 'metal to X' like DIGGING FOR TREASURE

this was alot better flow was smooth with the mutlies and i liked the punch 8/10

total: 41/50

I'll beat some sense into this retarded fuck when I smash the poor clown
Fuck tapping into his inner genius he'd have to blast the door down

apart from mutlies and flow being alright nothing wowing 4/10

Aight so why call out 'someone who doesn't suck' like ya got a right to compete*
Cause with 20 losses it seems this DICK likes to get beat every night of the week

funny shit and a nice use of a personal whippin shit up for him lol 8/10

Why bother nigga ya can't hit me cause everythin ya drop is shitty
When I say 'Q Be' tough y'all know I'm only talkin about Nas's city**

i have to agree with Evo on this i thought you were gonna do some kinda quarter back line but you reared off there alright bar coulda been better none the less 7/10

My skill's enormous I ain't need a shitty victim list to make me feel important
It must be real rewarding with 'Q no showing on the board' more than wheel of fortune

line was nice, i liked that shit smooth flow into the punchline being nice 9/10

Pred's a mean fucker, I'll 'KO Q' faster than I can COCK my beretta G
I guarantee after this you'll see a 'different side of q' like the letter b

imaginative on this bar i liked the punchline aswell, but the way it was set up in the first line kinda ruined it for me 6/10

Ridin ya tag partner's coat tails bitch boy you know ya wack on a track
It's obvious, Q/cue can't 'stand on his own' so put this nigga 'back on the rack'

was a nice flow smooth on the whole bar, and the mutlies were nice, pretty solid closer so 9/10

43/50

My Vote Goes To Pred X

[Kau the Lion]

Quix:

i'm a take a bat to your face and BRAKE HIS LEFT CHEEK, cuz your far from real ... you like the FAKEST TEXTCEE
I HATE THIS PEST, HE's about tah go broke ... Cuz we only seeing 'X sell (excel)' when MAKING SPREAD SHEETS

I liked the nameplay here a lot. I thought the flow was good, too. 5/5

I got better flows, superior punches, any many GREATER INTANGIBLES, my BEHAVIORS, A CANIBAL!
whos winning this? lets think ... Quix will kill Predator cuz 'X-stinks' like ENDANGERED ANIMALS

Nice nameplay again but the flow didn't come together as well. 4/5

you shouldn't TALK TAH ME DUDE; you should up your game quick, do it PROPERLLY TOO!
I'LL leave him decesed or killed... cuz he claims it exists ... but 'we can't see his skill' like BROCCOLI ROOTS (you can't see Brocoli roots, but they apparently still exist)

Thanks for the explanation, Bill Nye. Not feeling the punch at all. Not feeling any part of this bar. 1/5

i'll have this chump FALL FROM SHOTS; cuz he's a rat and a snake like nigguhs who CALL THE COPS
you ain't BALL, YOU FLOP! stab you in the stomach, and leave your 'Belly open' like a HAULTER TOP

Ok. Nothing special. 3/5

This newby prolly just here for HYPING HIS MAN, re-read your raps and spend time RE-TYPING THEM-DAMN!
you ain't a g, your hood is whack, plus this faggots allways 'good for trash' like RYCYCLING PLANTS

Eh. Flow felt a bit stretched. Punch was weak. 2/5

don't go THINKING YOU BETTER, i can see the Bitch in you .... the PINK IN YAH TEXTURE
sonin this BITCH IS MY PLEASURE; so watch me finish dude, and put the 'metal to X' like DIGGING FOR TREASURE

I liked the wordplay but the rhyme felt forced as hell. 3/5

18/30



Predator X:

I'll beat some sense into this retarded fuck when I smash the poor clown
Fuck tapping into his inner genius he'd have to blast the door down

Decent punch. Not much else to say. 3/5

Aight so why call out 'someone who doesn't suck' like ya got a right to compete*
Cause with 20 losses it seems this DICK likes to get beat every night of the week

Not feeling this one too much. You're calling him on his 20 losses ignoring the fact that he has 60 wins. Didn't hit hard for me. 2/5

Why bother nigga ya can't hit me cause everythin ya drop is shitty
When I say 'Q Be' tough y'all know I'm only talkin about Nas's city**

Alright. 3/5

My skill's enormous I ain't need a shitty victim list to make me feel important
It must be real rewarding with 'Q no showing on the board' more than wheel of fortune

Nice personal here and wordplay. I liked the multie, too. Didn't feel forced at all. 5/5

Pred's a mean fucker, I'll 'KO Q' faster than I can COCK my beretta G
I guarantee after this you'll see a 'different side of q' like the letter b

Decent nameplay but didn't hit that hard. 3/5

Ridin ya tag partner's coat tails bitch boy you know ya wack on a track
It's obvious, Q/cue can't 'stand on his own' so put this nigga 'back on the rack'

Again, decent but nothing too special. 3/5

19/30



Real close battle but I think Predator edged it with an overall more consistent verse. Quix had some nice punches but some real lame bars too that weighed the verse down.

Punches: Quix
Wordplay: Tie
Nameplay: Tie
Personals: Predator X
Flow: Predator X
Multies: Predator X

+1 Predator X

[Predator X]

Thanks for voting homies. That's a KO I believe?

Good battle Quix.

[Ambiguous Realm]

3-0 Predator wins, good battle guys

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