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FatalX
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OPEN UP your THIRD EYE,while I ELEVATE your MIND//
and CHANNEL through your CHAKRAS,just MEDITATE and VIBE//
I RESONATE with RHYME,so please believe I brought REASON//
MY MESSAGE is SUBLIMINAL,even when it doesnt SEEM IT//
I EMIT the FREQUEN-C's of a GENIUS//
BRAINWAVES MAKE WAY to HE who HEEDS THIS//
READ THIS SEIZE THIS,the SEQUENCE is ECLIPSED//
WE LIVE but WE LIVE in "PRETENSE of FREEDOM"//
FUCK THAT............let me explain with CONVICTION//
all these MODERN DAY BELIEFS,just lame SCIENCE FICTION//
I BLAME my ADDICTION,for this COSMIC KNOWLEDGE//
Did some real SOUL SEARCHING,I call it GODLY BONDAGE//
so look ILL BE HONEST,ME and YOU don't have a CHANCE//
we FIGHT a LOSING BATTLE,nothing SACRED shall ADVANCE//
into the FUTURE that we FACE,where HATRED has its HANDS//
on LOVE the LOST CAUSE,as it RAPES it with its CHANTS//

if anyone wants to collab on this peice feel free to post another thread with my permission and when your done we will both write one more verse and get people to feed on it as a whole and how well we woked together

please feed on this

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/reven ... 20800.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/just- ... 20805.html
I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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Post by J-Killa »

I like this a lot. You have very good wordplay. Everything seems to fit perfectly and you have a different choice of words in each line. Keep posting because id definitely like to hear more

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Post by Seanny T »

Good stuff, pretty deep man. Great word choices too!

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Melt ice with my glare, freeze water with my stare
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