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i kill Bitchs n Snitchz wit Ma Telekenesis Rip em To Pieces dont need No reasonz My Personality Changes like all 4 Seasons This bitch is Pleadin For anything But Beatenz im Feedin While shes Bleedin n Screamin Ma Many ways Of Scheming Has these Mutha fuckaz believen im not human being But seein the Hate in Ma Soul im Realeasin
pretty basic, we have a few rules here, ppost a link of feedback you left on somebody elses drop, but anyway this was pretty basic, like rell said u need to structure your bars a lil better the rhymign and vocab was on point just felt like i was readin an essay.
Yea ma Dude shazie told me about the Link after i posted it Ma bad tho n Yea im workin on doin the bars n spacen em so it dont look like a big paragraph jus ma first rhyme on here n didnt kno how it went ma dude failed to tell me alla that
Think iM Trippin? Tie Ma Shoe...
Cant Stand me? Sit the fuck Down...
Cant Face me? Then Turn the Fuck around...
For a Few Lines Dis Way Nice .. Multis Was Good
U Came All Out Nice in Diz
Favorite Linez : My Personality Changes like all 4 Seasons This bitch is Pleadin For anything But Beatenz im Feedin While shes Bleedin n Screamin
it was alright.... rhymes and vocab were pretty basic, and you didnt really have any substabce or real meanin begind any of your lines... you may wanna enroll in school here... your likely to grow more, and keep readin and postin feed on others and youll get more advice from everyone.....
and welcome to the site....
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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