Tired (Spoken)

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Dream
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Re: Tired (Spoken)

Post by Dream »

Wow!

So happy you shared this link!

I am a huge fan of spoken word pieces,
Especially ones spoken over an amazing beat!

Random: I love Evanescence! <3

Your piece has so much depth. Great imagery.
You maintained a good flow. A few rushed words, but w/e!
Words were spoken clearly, and well pronounced.

Overall, this was dope.

It's definitely worth listening to again!

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Re: Tired (Spoken)

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wow dude..... how the FUCK did i NOT find this?!?!?!? this was way too good.... i love this man.... RhymeSayer... Amy Lee was a GREAT touch.... this is a CD worth i wouldn't put it on one but its also Mixtape worth... i loved this man.... this was great... keep doing shit like this.... the way you just spoke it effortlessly... is that you singing faintly in the back???? if so man thats a track to touch somebody... epic stuff bro
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