The Light (final version)

[Defiance]

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This is the final version, mixed and mastered

looking for some solid feed

[ItsJayJr]

I like it, but if you're gonna make a deep song like this, you could drop a little more emotion into it. Let people know how you feel.

[Cyan]

"Gotta have a new plan." Comes off a bit robotic. I can hear that you're trying to inject more emotion into your delivery because I've heard a few of your tracks now. The beat is cool. Is a girl singin' that. "Same damn thoughts, Same damn tones." --> sounds good.

Yeah man ... still way to much squeeze on that voice dawg. I would suggest that you try to do three takes and try to make each one sound totally different. Just for fun. Get drunk and do it ... don't post it ... but do it to force yourself out of your Twizted comfort zone.