Faith

[thaphantom]

There's no meaning of faith it only depends on choice./
Life's just a haste and I'm yelling with no voice./

There isn't a reason for heartache./
But there's always mistakes./

How much can your heart take in a lonely world./
A broken heart needs to be re-pasted to it's original form./

Now a shattering emotion comes to say./
No more hurt to me none today./

As I lay and sit and think./
Lonely, how deep can my heart sink./

Like a bottomless pit of no end./
Really I sit with no friend./

No love, no one in my life./
A cold shrug, or a brush can't make things right./

Making a form of love that isn't real./
Something you thought to be true and you'd kill./

Time to think is anything worth this much hurt./
Even if there is a family problem you don't want to make it work?./

Now I'm tossed in the dirt and thrown down./
Like a poet lost in his work with no one around./

No one to share his true emotions./
In my mind you're the only person I'm holding./

But do you see a us anymore?./
You know I'd do anything I'd give you the world./

I know I can't make it./
I know my mistake is./

What ever goes down I have to see and know what to do first./
Cause either I'm a forget you and that will just be worse./

As I set in this chair and write out my emotions./
Love is a word so true that for us it could be spoken./

Well in my eyes it feels that way./
But you're gone and you been for seven days./

I'm down right now waiting for you to bring me up./
But maybe you left me for more then family problems that would be to much./

I see that you're meant for me./
And possibly you don't love thee./

So the thought have change maybe you don't miss me./
Maybe this could be your change in actions it just could be./

I just wouldn't and couldn't believe./
You hurting me purposely./

[precise]

not bad, more of a topical spit then a poem, with the format and everything, but i liked it, and you closed it out nicely, keep writin,

i noticed one thing, your trying to rhyme was restricting the vocab, poems arent all about rhyming just be creative, peeace