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Jeah, just some accapella I recorded real quick. Feedback is appreciated.
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Not too bad. Very articulate and well written. Sounded a lil too poetic at first...like sumthin I'd hear on "open mic nite" at some coffee house...but over all it was a dope flow. Good job.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

nice shit man,,,,,, it was a hot piece here..
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by complexity »

word, verse was sick
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty good, i never really saw anything like this from u, lyrically...so it really impressed me, and the vocab was dope as well as the rhyming and flow...keep it up, HOPING TO SEE MORE..
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Post by Lawgix »

yeah man... that was some good shit... quality was nice... lyrics were ill as hell... deliverance was good... i liked it... should spit somethin to a beat man... i'd like to hear more... keep it up man

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Post by drunken jesus »

pretty hot shit son
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by 8th »

appreciate the feedback yall.
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Post by B-Bear »

reminded me of chino xl on hot97 goin acapella..lol.. especially flow and delivery reminded me a looot!
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