Still Pathetic...

[complexity]

how can i find myself, when i'm blind by stealth ||
look in the mirror, and thats how you felt ||
its like being smacked across the face ||
with a belt, i'm looking for a place ||
for help, but its not there at all ||
as you stand tall, i can barely crawl ||
the wall is turning into a vault ||
n its my fault, i feel real small ||
hault, as i deserve to fall ||
but stall, cuz i don't deserve pain ||
u were never mine to attain ||
so how can i not have you ||
its hard to explain, thru ||
the same words, i'm to blame ||
its true, i'm still the same ||
in a different way, its insane ||
everything is so clear, its plain ||
how can a heart be drained? ||
when the heart pumps the brain ||
that must mean i'm not to sane ||
n the flame, is still there cuz ||
i love you the way it wuz ||
the blood rushes my vains ||
in floods, why is this luv? ||
not put above everything ||
cuz you dont feel the same way ||
maybe looking for better things ||
so for now, i'll stay away ||
n its still my fault, okay? ||
i was never good anyway ||
all day talking with pathetic words ||
i should just hang with other nerds ||

[16 Micz]

lol i get the topic and who you're addressing it to pretty nice i guess, basic but well worded...ill give it a 7/10 lol mr.depressed.

[drunken jesus]

tom is EMOOOOOOOOOO hahaha

i didn't read it but i will later

i've got a semi-depressed song dropping tomorrow probably if i sober up enough to drive

bitch i was with for like a month or so now just got kicked out of her parents crib and is moving to like virginia or some shit, & i can't really move cause of my lease and shit, and she was actually one of the best bitches i'be been with so it realllllllllly fucking sucks so i've been taking my happy pills and xanex till i can't feel anything and don't end up killing anybody

but yeah, i'll drop feedback on this and some other peoples shit too morrow i can't really read that well know so it wouldn't be that great

holla niggas, & jews

[complexity]

Lmao. He told me about the zantac, some fucked up shit.
Don't go into a coma.

Thanks for the feedback micz.

[drunken jesus]

zantac is heartburn medicine you fucking idiot


but word, hollal at a nigga in this thread, i'll peep all ya'lls shit even if its wack

-diva dicking don. aka ak.