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~Symbolikull~
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I break techniques like my souls an immortal,
Flawless victory, my flows can open a portal,
Like anthrax injested thru ur Nasal cavities,
Invade n take ur shit, no thoughts of fatal casualties,
Its horrifyin, i killed one but 4 more are dyin,
Kinda glorifyin, knowin my lyrics are mortifyin,
Thru speakin truth, learned, I burn ur eyes outs,
The gravities set in motion to Turn the tides now,
I feature cannibalism, ill eat u alive fuck capitalism,
Fuck the facts of religion how they hand u ur mission,
The skill in me's, on a killin spree slice like guillotines,
I love the thrill viciously, fuck accuracy I promote consistency,
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

lovin the feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

Its horrifyin, i killed one but 4 more are dyin,
Kinda glorifyin, knowin my lyrics are mortifyin,
Thru speakin truth, learned, I burn ur eyes outs,
The gravities set in motion to Turn the tides now,
I feature cannibalism, ill eat u alive fuck capitalism,
Fuck the facts of religion how they hand u ur mission,

prolly the nicest part 2 me^,wish it wuz longer but it wuz good newayz,multis were smooth and flow didnt fall off,keep droppin more homie
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Multies were nice, ya flow was on point. As you usual your vocabulary was amazing.
Also hopin for pieces like this to be longer.
Nice shit ghost.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

uppin
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Arvincible »

lol u had no feed on this sooo heres somethin


Its horrifyin, i killed one but 4 more are dyin,
Kinda glorifyin, knowin my lyrics are mortifyin,


those are the killer lines hah

Its really fuckin short though, you might wanna expand
cuz im pretty sure u have the vocab and skills to add a lot
more to it. Good stuff though, real crisp on this drop hehe
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