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WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT · Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:47 pm

The Flow Was Nice Throughout...Metas/Similes wise it lacked but there was some in there...I like the way you set it off and stayed consistant...

WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT · Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:53 pm

By Expanding I mean some of them were kind of simple and maybe could have been flipped/elaborated on a little more...Like spit to quench my thirst maybe you could have come up with a lil extra sumthin or a diff. way to say it. To increase the impact...But keep it up man

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:54 pm

thanx for the feed man

WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT · Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:55 pm

You are very welcome... *Claps* for being such a young and acceptive gentleman... *No homo*
*no homo*

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:14 pm

Findin ppl that have some good in the person within em,
Keep my head up, stay strong that's the worth in me livin,

^^^Thats fresh talk, real raw facts.. I thought that was the hardest hittin bar..

Pessimistic bastards are so blind, like they've never heard optimism,
I murk competition, turn opposition into words as I exurt compositions,
I like to earn what im getting, keep it calm rarely cursin in writtens,
& certain decisions get u caught up succumbed by worthless addictions,
Get better, heal from the pain then do it again like a circular systemâ€¦

A great closer and a great title, you had the motif for the title goin on real smooth
How this whole process of elevatin and toleratin and cometion is like an on-goin never-endin circle.

A real good read mang great stuff.
Keep typin or writin, cuz ur main purpose is to keep me entertained lol
Naw forealz though i give you a strong 9.2/10.

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:57 pm

There's nothing I could possibly say that none of these other jews haven't already stated.
Man...
...truely speechless.
I'ma be honest...you've written alot of shit. Good material too. But imo...and this is just mine ofcourse...
hands down...
...the dopest piece you've ever dropped.
This should definately go in the "classics"...cuz this one was truely an instant classic. No lie.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Feb 29, 2008 11:09 am

good looks homie...!!!!

Meta-the-DEMON · Post by **Meta-the-DEMON** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:09 pm

The legendary mono-verse! Hahah.. MC's usually crash and burn when they attempt this shit, but I gotta say I was very impressed.. I mean not only did you do a pretty nice job of keeping the multi tight but you busted some imagery and wisdom shit in that that was really just about as prevalent as the rhyme scheme to me. Very impressive verse. Your multies became forced a few times but that's to be expected with any mono-verse this long. Impressive drop. Way to flex skill. Respect.

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:04 pm

By far the best piece I've read of yours. Keep it up.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:22 am

nigga u ask for feed and never return the favor lol bitch

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:19 pm

i actually do but yall drop more than one drop a day, and you think jus cuz you drop feed on my one verse that i drop a week ima feed all ur lil bullshit drops... grow up fagget and keep my name outta ur mouth

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:20 am

lol i drop one too u idiot

dont act stupid about it

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