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Haz
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S.A.W Can R.I.P!
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Nice ..This Should Of Been A Battle.
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damm the punches in this was dope
the flows wre all prett good i think DTK came the hardest
but i cant decide all good verses
hope they return a diss
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Omega Bill »

Motherfuckers leaving me outta crew shit, haha.

Haz's verse was fire, and Dress2Kill came real nice, TOYH came nice too, but I think your flow and punches kinda fell off during some points, like some punches didnt hit as hard as they could have, but a good verse nonetheless.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Shit Was aiight ..
Lol Punches Was Koo ..
No Hard-Hittin Shit Tho ..

DTK Came Wit Tha Best Punches Tho ..
And Overall Had Tha Better Verse Outta Tha Three ..
Most Of ya Shit Was Simple But Koo ..

Haz That Barney Line Was Nice ..Lol
But Everythin Wasn't Up to Par Wit That Line ..
Verse Was aiight Tho ..

TOYH ..Shit Was Tha Weakest Of Tha Group ..
Had Some Okay Shit Here and There ..
But I Wasn't Feelin Tha Verse ..

Overall Collabo it Was Decent ..
Come Harder Next Time ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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Haz
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Could Say The Same To Ya Crew
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