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Whassuupp!

It's your favourite norwegian punk givin u my latest recording.. please hate, I like honest opinions.. but if u gon do just that, u might also leave some feed...
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man the flow wasnt bad
a bit choppy in places
but did well i liked the beat sort of
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Lawgix »

this was good shit man... for real u upped yaself man good job
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Post by B-Bear »

thanks man.. u too millz, appreciate it!
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

Dont count me as a hater or nothing but ima have to say same thing. ya flow was falling off at times. yo freestyle was good i felt it but whats the beat whats the name of it?
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

hmm i dont kno why but something about this track remind me of tupac. lol dont kno why keep dropping, but i dont recognize yo accent what are you?
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Post by B-Bear »

i'm fuckin norwgian.. !! lol.. so don't bitch around about my accent.. haha, it's precious!

but i kinda agree with u, when hearin the track the first couple of times it sounded like i fell off a few times, but listening to it over and over again .. tryin to find different ways to put it.. adn then it sorta sounded like it fitted.. lol

but appreciate your honest opinions.. i know my accent is fucked up, and it'll prolly always be as long as Im not living in an english-speaking country.. but once again. thank u for leaving feed
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Post by Subsist »

Great track. Lyrics were good. Beat was good. Emotion and Delivery was good. Who cares about the accent. The flow needs just a little fixing. Good job. Keep dropping.
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Post by HKX »

yo dis was dope i heard da accent a lil bit dis track wasn't bad it was aight keep droppin nigga
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Post by B-Bear »

Thanks, it's much appreciated.. I'll prolly post 4 or 5 more tracks when they're done..
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